Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you keep plants at home?
Thí sinh
No, I don't keep any prompts in home because I think it's really difficult to take care of them well.
Giám khảo
What plant did you grow when you were young?
Thí sinh
When I was little, I grow some tomatoes at home the because I think it's really easy to take care of and I really love these fruits.
Giám khảo
Do you know anything about growing a plant?
Thí sinh
No, actually not. I don't know how to take care of plant because I have no experience about that.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?
Thí sinh
Yes, Chinese people send plans as gifts to others because they think a plant is a symbol of good health and a great fortune. So they will send plants to show their respect to others.
Do you keep plants at home?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 用词和拼写要准确,句子结构更自然,并且回答可以更直接。可以先直接回答“否”,然后简短说明原因,避免拼写错误(prompts→plants)和冗余表达。可适当补充一两句具体原因以显得更自然。
Ví dụ: No, I don't keep any plants at home because I find them difficult to care for. For example, I often forget to water them and I worry I would kill them.
What plant did you grow when you were young?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 注意时态和语法(grow→grew),去掉多余词汇(the),并更具体描述经历(比如谁帮忙、在哪里种、结果如何)。使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: When I was little, I grew tomatoes at home because they were easy to look after and I loved eating them. My mother helped me plant them in pots on the balcony, and we harvested a few ripe tomatoes each summer.
Do you know anything about growing a plant?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答应更自然并注意冠词和词形(a plant),避免简单重复。可以说明具体缺乏哪些方面的知识,例如浇水频率、光照或施肥。加一两句表达愿意学习的态度会更积极。
Ví dụ: No, not really. I don't know much about how to care for a plant, such as how often to water it or how much sunlight it needs. But I'm willing to learn if I ever try growing one.
Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 修正拼写(plans→plants),使表达更简洁并提供具体例子或场合(比如乔迁、开业或节日)。使用连接词使逻辑更清楚,避免机械重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, Chinese people often give plants as gifts, especially for housewarmings or business openings, because plants symbolize good health and prosperity. For instance, people commonly send a potted money tree to wish someone good luck.
× No, I don't keep any prompts in home because I think it's really difficult to take care of them well.
✓ No, I don't keep any plants at home because I think it's really difficult to take care of them well.
原句中将 plants 错写为 prompts(拼写错误导致词不对),且短语 in home 用法不当。应使用 at home 表示“在家”。错误类型主要涉及冠词/短语搭配与词形错误。建议记住固定搭配 at home;并注意单词拼写(plant)。
× When I was little, I grow some tomatoes at home the because I think it's really easy to take care of and I really love these fruits.
✓ When I was little, I grew some tomatoes at home because I thought they were really easy to take care of and I really loved those fruits.
句子中时间状语为过去(When I was little),谓语却用现在时 grow,属于时态错误(应使用过去式 grew)。此外有多处问题:多余的定冠词 the,应删除;从句中 think 应与主句时态一致改为 thought;代词和指示词要一致,改为 they / those。建议复习过去时的用法及时态一致原则(sequence of tenses)。
× No, actually not. I don't know how to take care of plant because I have no experience about that.
✓ No, actually not. I don't know how to take care of plants because I have no experience in that.
主句使用现在时 don't know 与后面名词搭配有误:不可数/可数名词复数形式应为 plants(泛指多株植物)。短语 have no experience about that 用法不当,正确为 have no experience in / with 或 no experience of。建议学习常见固定搭配:experience in/with/of 和可数名词复数用法。
× Yes, Chinese people send plans as gifts to others because they think a plant is a symbol of good health and a great fortune. So they will send plants to show their respect to others.
✓ Yes, Chinese people send plants as gifts to others because they think a plant is a symbol of good health and great fortune. So they will send plants to show their respect for others.
原句中 first 'plans' 是拼写错误,应为 plants。短语 'a great fortune' 在此语境不需不定冠词,应为 'great fortune'(不可数概念);'show their respect to others' 搭配不准,常用为 'show respect for/to someone',但此处用 'for' 更自然。建议注意不可数名词前冠词的使用以及固定搭配 'show respect for'。