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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you keep plants at home?

Thí sinh

Of course, I keep lots of planted home. For example, when I was younger I planted some tomatoes. How I planted some more and I also planted some peanuts and other plants. Flowering plants. Just leaves all kinds of plants.

Giám khảo

What plant did you grow when you were young?

Thí sinh

Really smart models and I also grown 2 pots of beautiful flowers. There's one purple and another pink.

Giám khảo

Do you know anything about growing a plant?

Thí sinh

Not everything. I'm not a gardener. I just water them every day and. I don't use any fertilizers.

Giám khảo

Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?

Thí sinh

Sometimes we send flowers at plants. Valentine's or other? Festivals.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Do you keep plants at home?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: 答题要更直接并注意句子通顺与时态。先用一句主题句直接回答(I do / I don’t),然后用一到两句具体举例补充,避免碎片化短句与语法错误。可以把过去与现在分开叙述,使用恰当时态和连接词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I have several potted plants at home, including flowering plants and some vegetables like tomatoes. When I was younger, I also grew peanuts in the garden, so I’ve had experience with different types of plants.

What plant did you grow when you were young?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 回答要聚焦问题,用清晰的主题句并给出具体细节。避免不相关或不连贯的短语(如“really smart models”)。注意动词时态与主谓一致,并使用连接词把句子连贯起来。

Ví dụ: When I was young, I grew tomatoes and also kept two pots of flowers. One pot had purple blooms and the other had pink ones, which brightened my windowsill.

Do you know anything about growing a plant?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 可以先给出全面回答(简短主题句),然后补充具体做法或限制,用连词使句子完整。说明知道的和不知道的方面,并给出原因或例子,显得更自然和信息量更大。

Ví dụ: I know the basics, but I’m not an expert. I usually water my plants every day and don’t use fertilizers, so they rely on soil nutrients; I haven’t learned advanced techniques like pruning or fertilization yet.

Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答要明确并提供具体场景或习俗,避免中英文混杂和语序混乱。先给出总体结论,然后举一两个常见场合作为例子,使用连接词使表达流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, people in China sometimes give plants or flowers as gifts. For example, flowers are common on Valentine’s Day, and potted plants may be given during festivals or housewarming parties.

Ngữ pháp

26: Sentence structure errors

× Of course, I keep lots of planted home.

Of course, I keep lots of plants at home.

原句语序与词语选择混乱。“planted home”不是正确短语,意图是“家里种植的植物”或更简单的“家里有很多植物”。建议使用固定搭配“keep plants at home”或“have lots of plants at home”。

26: Sentence structure errors

× For example, when I was younger I planted some tomatoes. How I planted some more and I also planted some peanuts and other plants.

For example, when I was younger I planted some tomatoes. Later I planted some more; I also planted peanuts and other plants.

原句中“How I planted some more”结构不正确,应该用时间顺序词(如 later)或连接词连贯句子;另外句子间需用合适的连接符号。建议用“Later”或“After that”来表达随后发生的动作。

26: Sentence structure errors

× Flowering plants. Just leaves all kinds of plants.

There were flowering plants and plants with only leaves — all kinds of plants.

原句为片段句,缺少谓语,表达不完整。使用完整句子并加上连接词可以明确意思。中文建议使用完整句式并指出分类(开花植物、仅有叶子的植物等)。

5: Past tense issue

× Really smart models and I also grown 2 pots of beautiful flowers.

Really smart models, and I also grew two pots of beautiful flowers.

原句中“grown”是过去分词,独立使用时需搭配助动词(have/has)。描述过去发生的动作应使用一般过去时“grew”。另“2”请改为书写形式“two”。

3: There be issue

× There's one purple and another pink.

One was purple and another was pink.

原句用法偏口语且时态不一致。因为在叙述过去经历,使用过去时更准确;可用完整句“One was... and another was...”以保持句子结构完整。

26: Sentence structure errors

× Not everything. I'm not a gardener. I just water them every day and. I don't use any fertilizers.

Not really. I'm not a gardener. I just water them every day and I don't use any fertilizers.

原句“Not everything.”语义不清且“and.”句子被截断。将短句改为“Not really”更自然,并把两个短句合并为完整句子,避免孤立的连词。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× Sometimes we send flowers at plants. Valentine's or other? Festivals.

Sometimes we give flowers or plants as gifts for Valentine's Day or other festivals.

原句“send flowers at plants”介词使用错误,应使用“give ... as gifts”来表达送礼,且“Valentine's”应为“Valentine's Day”。句末“or other? Festivals.”为断裂句,应合并为“or other festivals”。

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