Friends— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Is there a difference between where you meet friends now and where you used to meet them in the past?

Thí sinh

Yes, there is a difference between where I meet mets and meet friends now and where I met them in the past. I used to meet my friend at our local market at fast food restaurants but nowadays I meet my friends

Giám khảo

Why are some places suitable for meeting while others are not?

Thí sinh

I believe some places are more suitable for meeting while others are not because some places are quieter and cozy you can talk continuously without any interruption, whereas some places are very disruptive and you can't focus or understand each other.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to spend time with one friend or with a group of friends?

Thí sinh

I always prefer to spend time with a group of friends because I am a little bit unintroverted and if there are groups there is a group of friends and we can share our thoughts with each other and we can spend our time nicely.

Giám khảo

Would you invite friends to your home?

Thí sinh

Yes, I would like to invite my friends to my home but there are only a few friends that you can trust for inviting them to your home. Only I prefer only few close friends to invite them to home my home.

Giám khảo

How important are friends to you?

Thí sinh

Friends are very important to me because I can share my thoughts, my ideas with them and exchange information with them and learn new things from my friends.

Giám khảo

Do you often go out with your friends?

Thí sinh

I only go out with friends on weekends or holidays. We go to local clubs and cafes to spend some quality time or if there's a match, and match, I used to go there with friends.

Giám khảo

Where do you often meet each other?

Thí sinh

We often meet each other at our bus stop near my home and from there we go to the city and enjoy our day.

Giám khảo

What do you usually do with your friends?

Thí sinh

I usually go with my friends, have some drinks, ever eat snacks and we usually watch movies together and occasionally I go on trips with my friends.

Giám khảo

Do you have a friend you have known for a long time?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have few friends that I have been And I have known them for a long time they are they studied with me from the first grade to the grade twelve and I spent with them twelve years and I know them very much.

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Part 1

Is there a difference between where you meet friends now and where you used to meet them in the past?

Điểm: 42.0

Gợi ý: Answer the comparison directly, then complete your thought about where you meet friends nowadays. Avoid repeating “meet friends,” and use “at” or “in” accurately when naming places. Add one brief detail to explain the change.

Ví dụ: Yes, there is a difference. I used to meet my friends at the local market or fast-food restaurants, but nowadays we usually meet at cafés. They are quieter, so we can talk more comfortably.

Why are some places suitable for meeting while others are not?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Your answer gives a clear reason and contrast. Improve the grammar by joining the ideas with “so,” and use a more natural adjective such as “noisy” instead of “disruptive” to describe places. You could also make the examples more specific.

Ví dụ: Quiet, cosy places are usually better for meeting because you can talk without interruptions. For example, a café with comfortable seating is a good choice, whereas a crowded, noisy place can make it difficult to hear one another.

Do you prefer to spend time with one friend or with a group of friends?

Điểm: 53.0

Gợi ý: State your preference once and explain it clearly. “Unintroverted” is uncommon here; say that you are sociable or enjoy being around people. Remove the repeated phrase about groups and use a specific benefit as support.

Ví dụ: I prefer spending time with a group of friends because I’m quite sociable. We can share different opinions, joke around, and enjoy a lively atmosphere together.

Would you invite friends to your home?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and explain that you would invite only close friends. Avoid repeating “only” and “my home,” and use the natural phrase “invite them over.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I would invite friends to my home, but only a few close ones. I feel more comfortable having people over when I know and trust them well.

How important are friends to you?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: This is a relevant, clear answer with good supporting reasons. To sound more natural and concise, avoid repeating “with them” and combine your points using a linking phrase such as “as well as.”

Ví dụ: Friends are very important to me because I can share my thoughts and ideas with them. They also introduce me to new things and help me see situations from different perspectives.

Do you often go out with your friends?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Your first sentence answers the question, but the final part is repetitive and the phrase “I used to go” does not fit well if you are describing what you do now. Clarify what kind of match you mean and connect it to your usual plans.

Ví dụ: I usually go out with my friends on weekends or holidays. We visit local cafés or clubs, and if there’s a football match on, we sometimes watch it together.

Where do you often meet each other?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: You answer the question directly and explain what you do next. For more natural phrasing, say “meet at the bus stop near my home” and add one specific place you visit in the city.

Ví dụ: We often meet at the bus stop near my home. From there, we take the bus into the city and usually visit a café or do some shopping together.

What do you usually do with your friends?

Điểm: 59.0

Gợi ý: You provide several relevant activities, but the sentence is difficult to follow. Use “have drinks or snacks,” remove “ever,” and connect the activities with a clear sequence. Avoid repeating “with my friends.”

Ví dụ: We usually have drinks or snacks and watch movies together. Occasionally, we also go on trips, which gives us a chance to explore somewhere new.

Do you have a friend you have known for a long time?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: You give a useful detail about knowing your friends since school, but the answer contains repeated phrases and incomplete grammar. Say “a few friends,” use “have known” consistently, and describe the length of the friendship in one clear sentence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a few friends I’ve known for a long time. We studied together from first grade through twelfth grade, so we’ve been friends for about twelve years.

Ngữ pháp

26: Sentence structure errors

× Yes, there is a difference between where I meet mets and meet friends now and where I met them in the past. I used to meet my friend at our local market at fast food restaurants but nowadays I meet my friends

✓ Yes, there is a difference between where I meet my friends now and where I met them in the past. I used to meet my friends at our local market or at fast-food restaurants, but nowadays I meet them elsewhere.

The phrase meet mets and meet friends contains a repeated, incomplete construction that makes the sentence unclear. The two locations also need to be joined clearly with or. Avoid repeating or restarting phrases, and make sure the final clause is complete.

26: Sentence structure errors

× I believe some places are more suitable for meeting while others are not because some places are quieter and cozy you can talk continuously without any interruption, whereas some places are very disruptive and you can't focus or understand each other.

✓ I believe some places are more suitable for meeting than others because some places are quieter and cozier, so you can talk without interruption. In contrast, some places are very disruptive, and you can't focus or understand each other.

The original joins two independent clauses, some places are quieter and cozy and you can talk, without a conjunction or suitable punctuation. Use so to show the result, or separate the ideas into sentences.

25: Comparative and superlative errors

× Some places are quieter and cozy.

✓ Some places are quieter and cozier.

The sentence compares places, so both coordinated adjectives should use the comparative form. Use cozier to match quieter.

26: Sentence structure errors

× I always prefer to spend time with a group of friends because I am a little bit unintroverted and if there are groups there is a group of friends and we can share our thoughts with each other and we can spend our time nicely.

✓ I always prefer to spend time with a group of friends because I enjoy being around people. When I am with a group, we can share our thoughts and enjoy our time together.

The phrase if there are groups there is a group of friends repeats the same idea and makes the sentence difficult to follow. Use a clear clause such as when I am with a group, and divide long strings of ideas into shorter clauses.

14: Incorrect use of quantifiers

× Only I prefer only few close friends to invite them to home my home.

✓ I prefer to invite only a few close friends to my home.

Few needs the article a when it means a small number of people. Use a few close friends. The original also repeats the invitation phrase, so express the idea once.

26: Sentence structure errors

× Only I prefer only few close friends to invite them to home my home.

✓ I prefer to invite only a few close friends to my home.

The original repeats words and phrases, and the word order makes the sentence difficult to understand. Put prefer to before the action and place only directly before the phrase it limits: only a few close friends.

5: Past tense issue

× We go to local clubs and cafes to spend some quality time or if there's a match, and match, I used to go there with friends.

✓ We go to local clubs and cafes to spend some quality time. If there's a match, I go there with my friends.

The answer describes what the student usually does now, so the habitual action should be in the present simple: I go. Used to describes a past habit and does not fit this present-time context.

20: Incorrect adverb placement

× I usually go with my friends, have some drinks, ever eat snacks and we usually watch movies together and occasionally I go on trips with my friends.

✓ I usually go out with my friends, have some drinks, sometimes eat snacks, and watch movies together. Occasionally, I go on trips with them.

Ever is not appropriate for describing a usual positive activity here. Use sometimes to describe an activity that happens on some occasions. Place the adverb before the activity it modifies.

14: Incorrect use of quantifiers

× Yes, I have few friends that I have been And I have known them for a long time.

✓ Yes, I have a few friends whom I have known for a long time.

Use a few to mean some friends. Few without a can suggest that there are almost none. The original also includes an incomplete and repeated phrase, so the correction states the idea once.

26: Sentence structure errors

× Yes, I have few friends that I have been And I have known them for a long time they are they studied with me from the first grade to the grade twelve and I spent with them twelve years and I know them very much.

✓ Yes, I have a few friends whom I have known for a long time. They studied with me from first grade to grade twelve, and I spent twelve years with them. I know them very well.

The original contains incomplete and repeated clauses, including I have been And I have known them and they are they studied. It also joins several complete ideas without clear punctuation. Use complete sentences and put the object of spent before the time expression: spent twelve years with them.

17: Incorrect use of the definite article

× They studied with me from the first grade to the grade twelve.

✓ They studied with me from first grade to grade twelve.

When referring generally to school grade levels, the is not normally used before first grade or grade twelve. Use from first grade to grade twelve.

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I know them very much.

✓ I know them very well.

Well is the adverb used to describe how well you know someone. Much does not naturally modify know in this meaning.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Close— Near; Dense; Evenly matched; Immediate; Intimate
Fast— Speedy; Secure; Indelible; Promiscuous; Quickly
Important— Significant; Main; Powerful
Little— Short; Young; Brief; Minor
Long— Lengthy; Soon; Yearn for
New— Recently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
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