Friends— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Is there a difference between where you meet friends now and where you used to meet them in the past?

Thí sinh

Yes, there are a lot of difference between now and past to meet with friends. Uh, well, uh, I'm meeting with my friend. We use the Internet or social media app to meet in now.

Giám khảo

Why are some places suitable for meeting while others are not?

Thí sinh

I believe it is because of surrounding environment. Uh, for example, if we we meet at the cafes or restaurant, it's appropriate to meet with friends. On the other hand, we meet at in the train or bus. It's not a quite good place to meet.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to spend time with one friend or with a group of friends?

Thí sinh

It depends on the situation. For instance, if I want to meet with friends to talk about my private matter, uh, it should be Small group is preferable uh on the other hand for the celebrating others.

Giám khảo

Would you invite friends to your home?

Thí sinh

Yes, it is sometimes occurred. Actually, I invited my Corey to my house because I like to talk with him more privately and more calm. Umm, it's a good opportunity to catch up.

Giám khảo

How important are friends to you?

Thí sinh

It's a different day essential for me because I couldn't live without a friend she's it's difficult to talk and resolute my opinions or.

Giám khảo

Do you often go out with your friends?

Thí sinh

No, it's not so much often recently because I am little busy than a few years ago, but if I have spare time to go out, I'd love to go with my friends because it's a good opportunity to catch up with them.

Giám khảo

Where do you often meet each other?

Thí sinh

I often meet with friends at restaurant and cafes because it's easy to connect and meet and these are located more convenient places like close to the station and bus station and it provide carb and relaxed atmosphere.

Giám khảo

What do you usually do with your friends?

Thí sinh

I usually talking a lot with my friends because, uh, it is relaxed atmosphere. For instance, when I met with my friends a few days ago, uh, we talk about the private matter and company matter.

Giám khảo

Do you have a friend you have known for a long time?

Thí sinh

Yes, definitely. I know a friend, it's about 30 years. We know each other. It's from uh, elementary school or middle school. It is essential for me to catch up.

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Part 1

Is there a difference between where you meet friends now and where you used to meet them in the past?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Answer the comparison directly and use correct past and present forms. Say “There are many differences between where I met my friends in the past and where I meet them now.” Also, clarify that social media helps you arrange meetings rather than “meet” friends online. Add one specific contrast, such as meeting at school in the past but meeting at cafés now.

Ví dụ: Yes, there is quite a big difference. In the past, I usually met my friends at school or in the neighborhood, whereas now we often arrange to meet through social media. We usually get together at a café or a restaurant.

Why are some places suitable for meeting while others are not?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear reason, such as comfort, noise, or privacy, and avoid grammatical errors like “at in the train” and “not a quite good place.” Use a linking phrase such as “whereas” to make the contrast smoother. Mention that cafés and restaurants provide seating and a relaxed atmosphere, while buses and trains are noisy and crowded.

Ví dụ: Some places are suitable because they are comfortable and relatively quiet. For example, cafés and restaurants usually provide enough space for people to sit and chat. In contrast, buses and trains are often crowded and noisy, so they are not ideal for having a conversation.

Do you prefer to spend time with one friend or with a group of friends?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Your opening is effective, but complete the comparison and use correct phrasing, such as “a small group is preferable” and “for celebrating.” Explain when you prefer one friend or a group, and use “whereas” or “on the other hand” correctly. Keep the answer within three or four complete sentences.

Ví dụ: It depends on what I want to do. If I need to discuss a personal matter, I prefer spending time with one close friend because I can speak more openly. However, for celebrations or social events, I prefer being with a larger group because the atmosphere is more lively.

Would you invite friends to your home?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: Use a natural expression such as “Yes, sometimes I do” instead of “it is sometimes occurred.” Correct “more calm” to “more calmly” or, more naturally, “in a more relaxed and private setting.” Explain what you would do at home, such as having dinner or catching up.

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes invite my friends to my home. Recently, I invited one of my close friends over because we wanted to talk privately and catch up. It was more comfortable and relaxed than meeting in a busy café.

How important are friends to you?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: State your opinion clearly with “Friends are extremely important to me.” Then give one or two complete reasons, such as receiving emotional support and sharing problems. Avoid unfinished phrases and incorrect expressions like “a different day essential” and “resolute my opinions”; use “sort out my thoughts” instead.

Ví dụ: Friends are extremely important to me because they provide emotional support. I can talk to them when I have a problem, and they help me sort out my thoughts. I also enjoy sharing everyday experiences with them, so I would find life much more difficult without close friends.

Do you often go out with your friends?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: The answer is relevant and includes a reason and contrast. Improve the grammar by saying “I don’t go out very often” and “I’m a little busier than I was a few years ago.” You could add one specific activity or frequency to make the answer more informative and natural.

Ví dụ: I don’t go out with my friends very often these days because I’m a little busier than I was a few years ago. However, I try to meet them once or twice a month when I have some free time. We usually have dinner or go for coffee so we can catch up.

Where do you often meet each other?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Give the location directly and use correct plural and agreement forms: “at restaurants and cafés” and “they provide.” Replace “carb” with “calm” or “comfortable,” and avoid repeating “meet.” Organize the reasons with “because” and “also,” explaining that these places are convenient and offer a relaxed atmosphere.

Ví dụ: I often meet my friends at cafés or restaurants near the train station. They are convenient because everyone can get there easily by public transport. They also provide a comfortable and relaxed atmosphere for chatting.

What do you usually do with your friends?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Use the present simple correctly: “I usually talk a lot with my friends.” Explain what you discuss and include a specific recent example. Replace “private matter and company matter” with “personal issues and work-related topics,” and use past tense consistently when describing the recent meeting.

Ví dụ: I usually chat with my friends and discuss what is happening in our lives. We talk about personal issues, work, and sometimes our future plans. For example, a few days ago, one of my friends told us about a problem at work, and we gave him some advice.

Do you have a friend you have known for a long time?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: The main idea is clear, but use the present perfect: “I have known a friend for about 30 years.” Avoid repeating “we know each other,” and clarify whether you met in elementary or middle school. Add one detail about why the friendship has lasted or how often you keep in touch.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I have known one of my closest friends for about 30 years. We met in elementary school and have stayed in touch ever since, even though we have both become busier. We still meet occasionally to catch up and talk about our lives.

Ngữ pháp

1: Singular and plural issue

× Yes, there are a lot of difference between now and past to meet with friends.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of differences between where I meet friends now and where I used to meet them.

The countable noun difference must be plural after a lot of. The plural form differences is required because the speaker is referring to several differences.

1: Singular and plural issue

× I'm meeting with my friend. We use the Internet or social media app to meet in now.

✓ I meet my friends using the Internet or social media apps now.

Friends and apps are plural because the statement refers to friends in general and more than one social media application.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× I'm meeting with my friend. We use the Internet or social media app to meet in now.

✓ I meet my friends using the Internet or social media apps now.

The preposition in is not needed before now. The natural expression is use something now or meet someone online.

22: Article errors

× I believe it is because of surrounding environment.

✓ I believe it is because of the surrounding environment.

A singular countable noun phrase such as surrounding environment normally needs a determiner. The definite article the is appropriate because the speaker is referring to the environment around the meeting places.

1: Singular and plural issue

× For example, if we we meet at the cafes or restaurant, it's appropriate to meet with friends.

✓ For example, if we meet at cafés or restaurants, they are appropriate places to meet friends.

Cafés and restaurants are being discussed as general types of places, so both nouns should be plural.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× On the other hand, we meet at in the train or bus.

✓ On the other hand, meeting on a train or bus is not very convenient.

The prepositions at and in cannot be used together here. The usual preposition for public transport is on, as in on a train or on a bus.

22: Article errors

× On the other hand, we meet at in the train or bus.

✓ On the other hand, meeting on a train or bus is not very convenient.

A singular countable noun such as train or bus needs an article. The indefinite article a is used when referring to any train or bus in general.

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× It's not a quite good place to meet.

✓ It is not quite a good place to meet.

The adverb quite must be placed before the article and adjective phrase in this structure. The natural order is quite a good place.

26: Sentence structure errors

× It should be Small group is preferable uh on the other hand for the celebrating others.

✓ If I want to discuss a private matter, a small group is preferable. On the other hand, I prefer a larger group when celebrating with others.

The original sentence contains two competing sentence structures and an incomplete phrase. Separate complete clauses make the contrast clear, and each clause has a subject and a verb.

22: Article errors

× It should be Small group is preferable.

✓ A small group is preferable.

Small group is a singular countable noun phrase, so it needs the indefinite article a.

21: Incorrect passive voice

× Yes, it is sometimes occurred.

✓ Yes, I sometimes invite my friends to my home.

The verb occur cannot be used in this passive structure, and the sentence does not clearly express the intended meaning. Use the active voice because the speaker is the person who invites the friends.

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I invited my Corey to my house because I like to talk with him more privately and more calm.

✓ I invited Corey to my house because I like to talk with him more privately and calmly.

Calmly is an adverb and is needed to modify the verb talk. Calm is an adjective and cannot directly modify a verb in this sentence.

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× It's a different day essential for me because I couldn't live without a friend.

✓ Friends are definitely essential to me because I could not live without them.

Definitely is the correct adverb for emphasizing essential. The original phrase different day does not function as an appropriate adverb in this sentence.

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× I couldn't live without a friend she's it's difficult to talk and resolute my opinions or.

✓ I could not live without my friends. Without them, it would be difficult to talk about and resolve my problems.

The pronouns she and it do not agree with the plural noun friends and do not clearly refer to anything. The pronoun them correctly refers to friends.

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× No, it's not so much often recently because I am little busy than a few years ago.

✓ No, I do not go out very often recently because I am a little busier than I was a few years ago.

Very often is the natural adverbial phrase for frequency. A little must include the article a, and busier is the correct comparative form of busy.

25: Comparative and superlative errors

× I am little busy than a few years ago.

✓ I am a little busier than I was a few years ago.

The conjunction than requires a comparative adjective. The comparative form of busy is busier, not busy.

22: Article errors

× I often meet with friends at restaurant and cafes.

✓ I often meet my friends at restaurants and cafés.

Restaurants and cafés are plural because the speaker is talking about places in general. The article a is therefore not needed.

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× These are located more convenient places like close to the station and bus station.

✓ These places are conveniently located near the station or bus stop.

Conveniently is the adverb needed to describe how the places are located. The adjective convenient cannot directly modify located in this structure.

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× It provide carb and relaxed atmosphere.

✓ They provide a calm and relaxing atmosphere.

The subject refers to restaurants and cafés, so the plural pronoun they requires the plural verb provide. The original singular pronoun it does not agree with that subject.

22: Article errors

× It provide carb and relaxed atmosphere.

✓ They provide a calm and relaxing atmosphere.

Atmosphere is a singular countable noun in this sentence, so it needs the indefinite article a.

8: Verb + -ing form

× I usually talking a lot with my friends because, uh, it is relaxed atmosphere.

✓ I usually talk a lot with my friends because the atmosphere is relaxed.

After the frequency adverb usually, use the base form talk for a habitual action. Talking is not correct here because there is no auxiliary verb such as am.

22: Article errors

× It is relaxed atmosphere.

✓ The atmosphere is relaxed.

Atmosphere is a singular countable noun and needs a determiner. The definite article the is suitable because the sentence refers to the atmosphere in the meeting place.

5: Past tense issue

× When I met with my friends a few days ago, we talk about the private matter and company matter.

✓ When I met my friends a few days ago, we talked about private and work matters.

The time expression a few days ago places the event in the past, so talk must be changed to the past-tense form talked.

1: Singular and plural issue

× We talked about the private matter and company matter.

✓ We talked about private and work matters.

The speaker is referring to matters in general, so the plural form matters is more appropriate. The phrase work matters is also a natural plural noun phrase.

6: Present tense issue

× I know a friend, it's about 30 years.

✓ I have known a friend for about 30 years.

The action began in the past and continues to the present, so the present perfect form have known is required. The preposition for introduces the length of the period.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× I know a friend, it's about 30 years.

✓ I have known a friend for about 30 years.

Use for before a duration such as about 30 years. Since is used with a starting point, while for is used with a length of time.

6: Present tense issue

× We know each other. It's from elementary school or middle school.

✓ We have known each other since elementary or middle school.

The relationship started in the past and continues now, so the present perfect form have known is appropriate. The preposition since introduces the starting time.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× We know each other. It's from elementary school or middle school.

✓ We have known each other since elementary or middle school.

Since is used to identify the point when the relationship began. From does not work naturally in this present-perfect duration structure.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Busy— Occupied; Unavailable; Hectic
Close— Near; Dense; Evenly matched; Immediate; Intimate
Different— Dissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
Difficult— Hard; Troublesome; Inconvenient
Easy— Uncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
Little— Short; Young; Brief; Minor
Small— Little; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
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