Friends— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cümle yapılarınızı düzeltin ve zaman uyumuna dikkat edin. Kısaltılmış ve doğal bir başlangıç cümlesi kurun, ardından geçmişle şimdiki durum arasındaki farkı bağlaçlarla netleştirin. Örneğin ‘in today’ yerine ‘these days’ kullanın, ‘a shopping malls’ yerine ‘shopping malls’ veya ‘the local park’ gibi doğru ifadeler kullanın. Ayrıca uzun cümleleri iki kısa ve bağlantılı cümleye bölün.

Ví dụ: These days I usually meet friends at cafés or events such as concerts and festivals. In the past, however, we used to meet at shopping malls and the small park near our houses.

Gợi ý: Mantıklı karşılaştırma yaparken bağlaçları ve doğru kelime sırasını kullanın. ‘Less stressful and comfortable’ yerine ‘less stressful and more comfortable’ gibi karşılaştırma yapın. Ayrıca ‘when you are when the first date’ ifadesini düzeltin: ‘on a first date’ kullanın. Sebep-sonuç ilişkisini net göstermek için ‘because’ bağlacını doğru yerleştirin.

Ví dụ: I prefer cafés because they are usually less stressful and more comfortable. On the other hand, concerts are not ideal for a first date because they are very loud and it is hard to talk and get to know each other.

Gợi ý: Cümlede birçok kelime hatası ve anlamsal belirsizlik var. Net bir konu cümlesi kurun (tek arkadaş mı grup mu), sonra nedenini kısa ve açık bir şekilde açıklayın. Örneğin ‘I prefer spending time with one close friend because…’. Özel isimleri doğru yazın ve gereksiz kelime oyunlarından kaçının.

Ví dụ: I prefer spending time with one close friend because our values and outlook on life are very similar, which makes conversations more meaningful.

Gợi ý: Fiil seçimlerine dikkat edin (‘invent invite’ yanlış). Düzenli alışkanlıklardan bahsederken ‘every Saturday’ ile başlayıp iki kısa cümleyle etkinlikleri açıklayın. Ayrıca ‘communicate with each other’ yerine daha doğal ifadeler kullanın, ör. ‘talk and share stories’.

Ví dụ: I invite my friends to my home every Saturday. We eat and drink together, talk about our lives, and share stories about difficult experiences we've had.

Gợi ý: Öncelikle anlatımı sadeleştirin ve dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin (‘share them my experiences’ → ‘share my experiences with them’, ‘advices’ → ‘advice’). Neden önemli olduklarını iki sebeple destekleyin, bağlaçlarla akışı sağlayın.

Ví dụ: My friends are very important to me because I share my experiences and my negative emotions with them, and I rely on them for advice and support.

Gợi ý: Kalıp hataları var: ‘go up with’ yanlış, ‘when we have study’ yerine ‘when we study’ veya ‘when we have classes’. Cümleleri netleştirip bağlaçlarla birleştirin. Ayrıca ‘related to our work’ yerine ‘for group work’ kullanın.

Ví dụ: I often go out with my friends at the weekends when we study together. We also hang out at my house to work on group assignments, since we are all in the same study group.

Gợi ý: ‘relaxable’ yanlış kelime; ‘comfortable and relaxing’ daha uygun. Cümleyi iki kısımda verin: genel buluşma yerleri ve kişisel tercihinizle ilgili kısa neden. Bağlaç kullanımıyla akışı iyileştirin.

Ví dụ: We usually meet at school or in cafés. However, I prefer meeting at my home because it is more comfortable and relaxing for the whole day.

Gợi ý: ‘give advices’ yanlış; tekil ‘advice’ kullanın. Cümleyi daha doğal hale getirmek için ‘we usually give each other advice about how to deal with and overcome problems’ gibi yapı kullanın. Gereksiz tekrarları azaltın.

Ví dụ: We usually give each other advice about how to deal with difficult experiences and how to overcome those challenges.

Gợi ý: Zaman yapısını düzeltin: ‘I have known her since she was five’ veya ‘I have known Beza since we were five’. Başlangıçta konu cümlesi kurun, ardından ilişkinin süresini belirtin.

Ví dụ: Yes. Beza is a friend I have known since we were five years old.

× In today you can meet friends at cafes or some events like concerts or festivals.

✓ Nowadays you can meet friends at cafes or at events like concerts or festivals.

'In today' is incorrect; use 'Nowadays' for current habits. Also add 'at' before 'events' for correct preposition use. Maintain present simple for general truths.

× However, in the past we were meeting at a shopping malls and the parks right corner of the houses.

✓ However, in the past we met at shopping malls and the parks near the houses.

Use simple past 'met' for past habits rather than past continuous 'were meeting'. Remove extra article 'a' before plural 'shopping malls'. 'Right corner of the houses' is unnatural; use 'near the houses' or 'in the corner near the houses'.

× Actually, I prefer cafes which are less stressful and comfortable.

✓ Actually, I prefer cafes because they are less stressful and more comfortable.

Use 'because' to give reason; use comparative 'more comfortable' to compare. 'Which are' is not wrong but 'because they are' is clearer. Also 'less stressful and comfortable' is ambiguous; pair 'less' with one adjective and 'more' with the other.

× On the other hand, I believe that concerts are not suitable for the meeting when you are when the first date because they are so loud and you can't communicate.

✓ On the other hand, I believe that concerts are not suitable for a first date because they are so loud and you can't communicate.

Use 'a first date' instead of 'the meeting when you are when the first date'. Remove redundant words and use simple present 'can't' for general statement. 'for the meeting' is unnecessary; 'for a first date' is natural.

× Definitely I preferred sponge but thyme with cehan because our relationship with each other and the perspective of life is similar in too many areas.

✓ Definitely I prefer spending time with Cehan because our relationship and outlook on life are very similar in many areas.

Use present simple 'prefer' for current preference. Original contains misspellings 'sponge'->'spending', 'thyme'->'time'. Capitalize proper name 'Cehan'. Use plural verb 'are' to agree with plural subject 'relationship and outlook'. Replace 'too many areas' with 'many areas' or 'too many' depending on meaning.

× Every Saturday I invent invite my friends to my home, we drink and eat and communicate with each other, and also we tell stories about challenging experiences to each other.

✓ Every Saturday I invite my friends to my home; we eat and drink, talk with each other, and tell stories about challenging experiences.

Remove 'invent' which is wrong word; use 'invite'. Use simple present 'invite' for habitual actions. Use semicolon or separate sentences to avoid run-on sentence. 'Communicate with each other' is better as 'talk with each other'.

× My friends are remarkably and significantly important to me because I always share them my experiences, also emotions that I feel bad about and I expect them to give me advices.

✓ My friends are very important to me because I always share my experiences and the emotions I feel bad about with them, and I expect them to give me advice.

'Remarkably and significantly important' is redundant; use 'very important' or one modifier. 'Share them my experiences' should be 'share my experiences with them'. 'Advices' is uncountable; use 'advice'. Rearrange clause order for clarity.

× I frequently go up with my friends at weekends when we have study.

✓ I frequently go out with my friends at weekends when we have study sessions.

Use 'go out' not 'go up'. Use 'at weekends' or 'on weekends' (both acceptable). 'Have study' is incorrect; use 'study sessions' or 'classes'.

× We also hang out at my home related to our work.

✓ We also hang out at my home to work on our projects.

'Related to our work' is awkward here; express purpose with 'to work on our projects' or 'to work together'. This clarifies why hanging out at home occurs.

× We all in the same study group.

✓ We are all in the same study group.

Missing verb 'are' required for present simple. Ensure subject-verb agreement by including auxiliary.

× We generally meet at school or cafes and I prefer my home because it's more comfortable and relaxable for the day.

✓ We generally meet at school or in cafes, and I prefer my home because it's more comfortable and relaxing for the day.

Use 'in cafes' or 'at cafes' consistently. 'Relaxable' is not standard; use 'relaxing'. Add comma before conjunction for clarity.

× We usually give advices to each other about bad experiences and how we can face them and overcome that obstacles.

✓ We usually give advice to each other about bad experiences and how we can face them and overcome those obstacles.

'Advice' is uncountable (not 'advices'). Use 'those obstacles' to refer back to plural 'experiences' or 'them'. Ensure pronoun agreement.

× Beza is my friend and I know her since she was 5.

✓ Beza is my friend and I have known her since she was five.

Use present perfect 'have known' with 'since' to indicate an action continuing from past to present. Spell out numbers under ten as words in formal writing and include 'been' omitted? actually not needed.