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Gợi ý: 回答切题，但语法错误、重复和表达不完整较多。应先直接说明“经常看到”，再补充广告出现的场景和感受。注意使用正确搭配，如“advertisements pop up”和“close the ads”，不要说“pay to close advertisements”，除非你确实指付费去广告。建议控制在2—3个清晰句子内，并用“especially”或“as a result”连接细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often see advertisements on both my phone and computer. They usually pop up when I open an app or browse a website, especially free ones. They can be quite annoying, so I sometimes pay for an ad-free version.

Gợi ý: 你使用了“vividly remember”等较好的词汇，也提到了广告的主题，但内容存在明显重复和不完整表达。“non-commercial advertisement”与“television show on TV”略显重复；“during the SAS period”含义不清，可能需要确认是否想说“SARS period”。应按照“广告是什么—何时看到—为什么印象深刻”的顺序回答，并使用过去时，例如“showed how doctors and nurses tried”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I remember a public-service advertisement from my childhood very clearly. I saw it on television during the SARS outbreak in 2003, and it showed doctors and nurses trying to save patients. It made a strong impression on me because it was serious and emotionally moving.

Gợi ý: 回答包含了火车站、机场和交通工具内部等具体地点，方向正确，但“on train stations”应改为“at train stations”，“some advertisement are”应改为“some advertisements are”。最后一句没有说完整，应该明确广告对交通公司的作用，例如“they are an important source of revenue”。建议使用“not only…but also”减少重复，并补充你对这些广告的看法。

Ví dụ: Yes, I see a lot of advertisements at train stations, airports, and inside buses and trains. They are usually placed where passengers have plenty of time to look at them. In fact, advertising is an important source of revenue for transport companies.

Gợi ý: 开头“ It depends on...”非常适合作为直接回答，但后半部分重复较多，且句子没有完成。“advertisement”需要根据数量使用复数“advertisements”，“like such as”不能同时使用。建议清楚对比公益广告和商业广告，并用“whereas”或“however”连接；最后说明你不喜欢什么类型的广告。

Ví dụ: It depends on the type of advertisement. I like public-service ads about recycling and saving water because they raise awareness of environmental issues. However, I dislike advertisements that are overly aggressive or appear repeatedly while I am using an app.

Gợi ý: 回答的观点明确，也给出了“recycling”和“water conservation”等相关词汇，但结尾突然中断，影响完整性。“they are raised”应改为“they raise”，“opt environmental friendly habits”应改为“adopt environmentally friendly habits”。建议补充一个具体广告或具体效果，并避免重复“environmental friendly”。

Ví dụ: I like non-commercial educational advertisements, especially those promoting recycling and water conservation. They raise public awareness and encourage people to adopt environmentally friendly habits. For example, a recycling campaign I saw online explained how to sort household waste, so it was both practical and memorable.

Gợi ý: 你表达了“不会仅因广告冲动购买”的核心观点，也提供了购买前比较品牌的细节，这是较好的回答结构。但“impulsive fire”应为“impulsive buyer”，“because one advertisement”应为“because of an advertisement”；最后一句没有完成。建议先直接回答“Yes, but not usually”或“No, not directly”，再说明广告如何引起兴趣，以及你会如何核实价格、质量和评价。

Ví dụ: Yes, advertisements have sometimes made me interested in a product, but I rarely buy something immediately because of one. I usually compare different brands, check online reviews, and look at the price first. Therefore, an advertisement may attract my attention, but it is not the only factor that influences my decision.

× And whenever I open up an app there are always come the always the advertisement advertisements pop up first.

✓ Whenever I open an app, advertisements always pop up first.

原句中“There are always come...”的词序和结构错误。这里应直接使用主语“advertisements”加谓语“pop up”。同时，“advertisements”是可数名词复数，因此要使用复数形式。

× I have to pay to for the phone to open to close that app advertisements so sometimes.

✓ Sometimes, I have to pay to remove those advertisements.

“pay to for”介词重复且搭配错误。表示“付费做某事”时使用“pay to do”；“close advertisements”不符合这里的语义，表示移除广告时应使用“remove advertisements”。

× I have to pay to for the phone to open to close that app advertisements so sometimes.

✓ Sometimes, I have to pay to remove those advertisements.

原句包含多个动词短语，结构混乱，无法形成清晰完整的句子。应改为“pay to remove those advertisements”，表达“付费移除这些广告”。

× I can vividly remember 1 non commercial advertisement when I was a child that I came across on the television show on TV.

✓ I can vividly remember a non-commercial advertisement that I came across on television when I was a child.

单数可数名词“advertisement”前需要使用不定冠词“a”，不能使用数字“1”。“on television”表示“在电视上”，通常不需要定冠词“the”。

× I can vividly remember 1 non commercial advertisement when I was a child that I came across on the television show on TV.

✓ I can vividly remember a non-commercial advertisement that I came across on television when I was a child.

“on the television show on TV”的介词和表达重复。表示通过电视看到某事时，使用“on television”即可。

× It's actually about when. It's actually during the SAS period in 2003.

✓ It was actually shown during the SARS period in 2003.

“It’s actually about when”表达不完整，缺少清晰的谓语和信息。这里需要使用完整结构“It was shown during...”来表达“它是在……期间播出的”。另外，“SAS”应为“SARS”。

× That advertisement tells about how doctors and nurses trying to save people.

✓ That advertisement showed how doctors and nurses tried to save people.

问题描述的是2003年的广告，因此应使用过去时。“tells”应改为过去式“showed”，“trying”也应改为过去式“tried”，使整句时态保持一致。

× Yes, there are so many advertisements on both train stations and airports and even in the transport itself, sometimes some advertisement are very interesting.

✓ Yes, there are so many advertisements at train stations and airports and even on public transport. Sometimes, some advertisements are very interesting.

“some”后面应接可数名词复数，因此“some advertisement”应改为“some advertisements”。

× Yes, there are so many advertisements on both train stations and airports and even in the transport, in the transport itself.

✓ Yes, there are so many advertisements at train stations and airports and even on public transport.

表示在车站或机场时，通常使用介词“at”；表示在公交、火车等公共交通工具上或其中时，通常使用“on public transport”。“in the transport”在这里不自然。

× I know it's very important because the I think it's one of the main sources of income of this.

✓ I think advertising is very important because it is one of the main sources of income for transport companies.

原句中“because the I think”连接混乱，“of this”也没有明确指代对象。应重新安排句子结构，并明确说明“广告是交通公司的主要收入来源之一”。

× Some non commercial and educational advertisement I think are very important like such as the rubbish recycling and paper recycling and water saving.

✓ I think some non-commercial and educational advertisements are very important, such as advertisements about rubbish recycling, paper recycling, and water conservation.

“some”后面需要使用复数名词，所以“advertisement”应改为“advertisements”。列举例子时，“like such as”重复，只保留“such as”即可。

× Some non commercial and educational advertisement I think are very important like such as the rubbish recycling and paper recycling and water saving.

✓ I think some non-commercial and educational advertisements are very important, such as advertisements about rubbish recycling, paper recycling, and water conservation.

“like such as”不能同时使用，因为两者都可以表示“例如”。选择一个即可；这里使用“such as”更自然。

× Some non commercial and educational advertisement I think are very important like such as the rubbish recycling and paper recycling and water saving and these are yes I like them but some.

✓ I like some non-commercial and educational advertisements, especially those about rubbish recycling, paper recycling, and water conservation.

原句包含多个想法，但没有使用清晰的主语、谓语和连接结构，导致句子不完整。可以拆分并重组为一个完整、清楚的句子。

× I like non commercial educational ads that promote like recycling, water conservation because they are raised the public awareness and encourage people to opt environmental friendly environmental friendly habits.

✓ I like non-commercial educational ads that promote recycling and water conservation because they raise public awareness and encourage people to adopt environmentally friendly habits.

“environmental friendly”应改为副词“environmentally”加形容词“friendly”，形成正确表达“environmentally friendly”。另外，“raise public awareness”是固定搭配。

× I like non commercial educational ads that promote like recycling, water conservation because they are raised the public awareness and encourage people to opt environmental friendly environmental friendly habits.

✓ I like non-commercial educational ads that promote recycling and water conservation because they raise public awareness and encourage people to adopt environmentally friendly habits.

“promote like recycling”以及“they are raised”结构错误。此处“recycling and water conservation”是“promote”的宾语；主语“they”指广告，因此应使用主动语态“they raise”。

× I remember 1 advertisement that.

✓ I remember an advertisement that promoted recycling.

原句以关系代词“that”结尾，后面缺少谓语，句子不完整。单数可数名词“advertisement”前应使用“an”，并补充谓语“promoted”。

× I remember 1 advertisement that.

✓ I remember an advertisement that promoted recycling.

“advertisement”以元音音素开头，因此前面应使用“an”，不能使用数字“1”。

× I'm not an impulsive fire that I mean I want to buy a buy anything that because one advertisement.

✓ I'm not an impulsive buyer who buys everything because of an advertisement.

“fire”不是这里需要的名词，表示“购物者”应使用“buyer”。“impulsive buyer”后面应使用关系代词“who”连接对人的描述；“because of an advertisement”表示“因为一则广告”。

× I'm not an impulsive fire that I mean I want to buy a buy anything that because one advertisement.

✓ I'm not an impulsive buyer who buys everything because of an advertisement.

原句中“that I mean”“buy a buy anything”和“because one advertisement”结构混乱，多个动词和连接词重复。应使用“who buys everything because of an advertisement”形成完整的定语从句。

× Sometimes the advertisement may raise me the umm the emotion to want to buy something.

✓ Sometimes, an advertisement may arouse my desire to buy something.

“raise me the emotion”不是自然的英语结构。表达“激起我购买的欲望”时，可以使用固定搭配“arouse my desire to buy something”。

× I will look into their.

✓ I will look into their products.

“their”是物主限定词，后面必须接名词；原句缺少名词，因而不完整。补充“products”后，句子表示“我会查看它们的产品”。