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Gợi ý: 稍作调整你的回答结构与语言，使表达更自然并减少重复。首先直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体细节支持，注意动词时态和单数复数一致，避免冗长的短语。可以使用连接词如 "for example" 或 "so" 来使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on my phone and computer. For example, apps like TikTok often insert short video ads that interrupt my viewing, which I find quite annoying.

Gợi ý: 回答内容很好，但语言需更清晰、避免语法错误和不完整句。开头直接回答，再用连词扩展细节，最后总结该广告给你的印象或影响。修正如“the same movement”不明确的问题。

Ví dụ: Yes. I remember a public service ad about kindness. It showed a street cleaner whose lamp went out while he was eating, and a woman on the second floor switched on her light to help him. The ad stayed with me because it emphasized how small acts of compassion can make a big difference.

Gợi ý: 结构明确但可以更自然简洁。使用一个主题句加一两句具体例子或频率说明，并用连接词衔接。注意标点与单复数一致。

Ví dụ: Yes, I see a lot of ads on trains and at stations. For instance, train stations and airports often have posters and digital screens advertising new products or films, and the content changes frequently so there is always something new to notice.

Gợi ý: 回答思路清晰但语言需更精准。把观点分两句表达并用连接词如 "however" 或 "but"，同时避免重复和不必要的词语，改正语法错误（例如 "features a celebrity I disliked" 应为 "that feature a celebrity I dislike"）。

Ví dụ: It depends on the type. I like public service ads because they are educational and positive, but if an ad features a celebrity I dislike, I usually skip it immediately.

Gợi ý: 内容具体但表达可更地道。先给主题句，再用一两个具体例子说明，并使用合适的词汇（如 "use vivid imagery" 而不是 "vivid things"），注意单复数一致。

Ví dụ: I prefer public service advertisements because they are educational and promote moral values. For example, road safety and environmental campaigns often use vivid imagery and memorable stories to encourage people to change their behavior.

Gợi ý: 回答可以合并为一至两句以避免断裂句。直接回答后说明原因并用具体短语替代不自然的表达（如 "I usually ask people I know" 而不是 "ask for someone around me"）。

Ví dụ: I rarely buy things because of ads. Instead, I usually ask friends or read online reviews to judge a product's quality before deciding to buy.

× Yes I do. Numerous advertisements pop out when I turn on my mobile phone or computers.

✓ Yes, I do. Numerous advertisements pop up when I turn on my mobile phone or computer.

存在主谓一致和可数名词单复数问题："computers" 与前文 "my" 不一致，应为单数"computer"；短语习惯搭配是"pop up"而非"pop out"。另外在书面语中在句首逗号更合适。建议注意代词所有格与名词数一致，并记住常用动词短语。

× Especially on some app like TikToks, there are a lot of interrupted advertisements added into the short video which annoy me a lot by interrupting me

✓ Especially on some apps like TikTok, there are a lot of interrupting advertisements added into short videos, which annoy me a lot.

介词和名词形式使用不当："app" 应使用复数"apps"与 "some" 搭配；"TikToks" 应为品牌名"TikTok"；句中"short video" 应为复数"short videos"；语法上用现在分词"interrupting advertisements" 更自然。句尾重复短语"interrupting me" 冗余，改为从句"which annoy me a lot"。建议注意名词与限定词的一致性，避免重复表达。

× When I was a child, I remember a public service advertisement about kindness.

✓ When I was a child, I remembered a public service advertisement about kindness.

时态使用不当：句首有过去时间状语"When I was a child"，应使用过去时态"remembered" 而不是现在时"remember"。建议在含明确过去时间的句子中使用过去时。

× It showed a street cleaner eating under a street light that went out, and a woman living on the second floor turned on her lights to help him.

✓ It showed a street cleaner eating under a street light that had gone out, and a woman living on the second floor turning on her light to help him.

被动/时态和非谓语结构问题：描述发生的先后顺序时，先发生的动作用过去完成时更恰当，故用"had gone out"；后半句原为两个并列谓语"turned on" 感觉不连贯，用现在分词短语"turning on" 与前半句并列作补充更自然；另外"lights" 在此情境中应为单数"light"。建议理清事件时间顺序并用合适的非谓语结构保持句子流畅。

× The same movement because it highlighted small acts of compassion and the importance of helping others.

✓ The same moment stayed with me because it highlighted small acts of compassion and the importance of helping others.

句子结构错误：原句"The same movement because..." 缺少谓语，使句子不完整。应补充谓语表达记忆留下深刻印象，例如"stayed with me" 或 "left an impression on me"，使句子完整。建议构造完整主谓结构。

× Yes I do, I often see many advertisements at train stations and airports, including posters and digital screens.

✓ Yes, I do. I often see many advertisements at train stations and airports, including posters and digital screens.

标点与句子连接问题影响句子结构完整性：原句用逗号连接两个独立句，需分为两句或使用分号。建议在独立句之间使用句点或分号以保证语法正确。

× They usually promote new products or movies and they change frequently, so I can always see something new.

✓ They usually promote new products or movies, and they change frequently, so I can always see something new.

时态总体可接受，但句子中缺少连词逗号导致可读性下降。此处主要是标点问题而非时态。建议在并列句之间加逗号或分号以改善句子流畅性。

× It depends on the type of advertisement.

✓ It depends on the type of advertisement.

句子本身语法正确，无需修改。保留原句。建议继续使用此表达。

× I enjoy watching some public service advertisements because they are educational and positive.

✓ I enjoy watching some public service advertisements because they are educational and positive.

该句语法正确，无需修改。保持原句。

× However, I dislike advertisement features a celebrity I disliked, and then I will turn it off without any hesitation

✓ However, I dislike advertisements that feature a celebrity I dislike, and I will turn them off without any hesitation.

主谓一致与代词形式错误："advertisement features" 应改为关系从句"advertisements that feature"；时态与一致性问题用现在时"I dislike" 与"feature" 保持一致；代词指代不当，改为复数"them"；去掉多余的"then"。建议使用正确的关系从句和代词一致。

× I like watching public service advertisements because they are educational and promote moral value.

✓ I like watching public service advertisements because they are educational and promote moral values.

名词使用与数一致问题："moral value" 多数情况下应使用复数"moral values" 指多种道德价值。建议在类似泛指场合使用复数形式。

× For example, the advertisement about road safety and environmental protection use vivid things and memorable plots to encourage people to change their behaviors.

✓ For example, the advertisements about road safety and environmental protection use vivid images and memorable plots to encourage people to change their behaviour.

主谓一致、词汇和介词搭配问题：主语为复数"advertisements"，动词应为"use"（原句已为"use"，保持），但"vivid things" 不自然，改为"vivid images" 更贴切；"behaviors" 在英式英语中常写作"behaviour"（若使用美式英语可保留"behaviors"）。建议使用更准确的名词搭配以提高表达自然度。

× I seldom buy things because of advertisement.

✓ I seldom buy things because of advertisements.

单复数问题："advertisement" 在此泛指广告，应使用复数"advertisements" 或在前加冠词"an advertisement"。建议注意可数名词在泛指时的数形一致。

× Because I get used to ask for someone around me or read some reviews online to judge the quality of the products instead of relying too much on advertisement.

✓ Because I am used to asking people around me or reading reviews online to judge the quality of products instead of relying too much on advertisements.

介词/动词形式与代词使用错误：短语应为"be used to + -ing"，所以用"am used to asking"而不是"get used to ask"；"ask for someone around me" 不自然，改为"asking people around me"；"read some reviews" 改为动名词"reading reviews"；产品前不需定冠词且"advertisement" 应为复数"advertisements"。建议记住固定搭配"be used to + -ing" 并注意可数名词的复数形式。