Advertisement— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and keep it concise (max 3–4 short sentences). Use linking words to explain frequency and effect. Be specific about when and how ads distract you.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone when I use social media such as YouTube and Facebook. Because they appear between videos or in my feed, they frequently interrupt what I'm watching. As a result, ads can be quite distracting, especially when I am trying to focus on a video.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct topic sentence identifying the ad, then give 2 specific reasons why it was memorable. Use past tense consistently and clearer vocabulary (e.g., "impressed", "peaceful", "humorous").

Ví dụ: Yes. When I was a child I remember a TV advertisement for Hill Coffee that impressed me. The ad showed a peaceful, beautiful model in a humorous situation, which made it memorable. Because the music and visuals were calming yet funny, I still recall it now.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer about frequency, then give one or two specific examples of where ads appear (inside trains, station walls, digital screens). Use correct vocabulary (e.g., "on public transport", "posters", "digital screens") and keep sentences short and coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I see a lot of advertising on public transport, especially on the subway. For example, there are posters on carriage walls and digital screens on platforms. These ads are hard to avoid during my commute.

Gợi ý: Answer directly whether you like ads, then explain reasons with clear, simple language. Fix word choice errors (e.g., "useful", "tool", "customers") and provide one concrete example of how ads help customers.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like advertisements because they are a useful tool for informing customers. For example, ads can introduce new products and explain their benefits, helping people decide what to buy.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence naming the type of ads you prefer, then give specific reasons (e.g., authenticity, relatable reviews, creative videos). Use correct plural/singular forms and linking words like "because" or "for example."

Ví dụ: I prefer influencer advertising because influencers create creative and relatable video content. For example, when an influencer shows how they use a product honestly, it persuades me to try it and often inspires my purchases.

× Yes, a frequency see advertisements on my phone while I pay my social media, for example YouTube or Facebook and I think it's quite distract me from when I travel in a feed.

✓ Yes, I frequently see advertisements on my phone when I use social media, for example YouTube or Facebook, and I think they often distract me when I scroll through my feed.

Pronoun and noun reference errors: 'a frequency see' is incorrect; correct form is the adverb 'frequently'. 'pay my social media' is wrong; use 'use social media'. 'it's quite distract me' misuses pronouns and verb forms; use plural 'they' to refer to advertisements and 'distract me'. 'when I travel in a feed' is incorrect imagery; use 'when I scroll through my feed'. Improve by ensuring subject-pronoun agreement and using appropriate adverbs and verbs.

× When I was young, I remember a TV advertisement for Hill Coffee that is make a big impatient on me is peace and beautiful model, but in a funny situation that is make me.

✓ When I was young, I remember a TV advertisement for Hill Coffee that made a big impression on me; it used a peaceful, beautiful model in a funny situation that amused me.

Incorrect verb form and word choice: 'is make' should be past tense 'made' (past participle used with auxiliary or simple past). 'impatient' is wrong; the correct noun is 'impression'. 'is peace and beautiful model' should be 'a peaceful, beautiful model'. 'that is make me' should be 'that amused me'. Improve by using past tense for past events and correct noun/adjective choices.

× Yeah, when I am in a public transportation for example subway, I don't know how to look for but so I will sew the skin on train that have our advertising and also.

✓ Yeah, when I am on public transportation, for example the subway, I don't always know where to look, but I will see the ads on the train.

Preposition and vocabulary errors: use 'on public transportation' (not 'in a public transportation') and include the article 'the subway'. 'look for' is inappropriate here; use 'look' or 'know where to look'. 'sew the skin on train' is incorrect vocabulary—should be 'see the ads on the train'. Also fix subject-verb agreement 'that have our advertising' to simpler phrasing. Improve by choosing correct prepositions and common collocations.

× Yes, I like advertisement because this is a impaired important tools or migrator to present the product as a customer.

✓ Yes, I like advertisements because they are an important tool to present a product to customers.

Adjective/adverb and article errors: 'impaired important' is incorrect; simply 'important' is needed. 'tools' should be singular 'tool' to match 'an' or use plural with 'they are'. 'migrator' is incorrect word choice; use 'means' or 'way'. Also use plural 'advertisements' and pronoun 'they are'. Improve by using correct adjectives, articles, and vocabulary.

× I think it's have a really useful for for customer to know the product that stood to us and also know the benefit of the product.

✓ I think they are really useful for customers to learn about a product and to understand its benefits.

Pronoun and verb errors: 'it's have a really useful' mixes pronoun and verb incorrectly—use 'they are really useful'. Remove duplicate 'for'. 'customer' should be plural 'customers' for general statements. 'product that stood to us' is unclear; use 'a product' and 'understand its benefits'. Improve by matching pronouns to their antecedents and using correct verb forms and pluralization.

× I like advertising from influencer, they always create a creativity and good content, video content that is persuade me to want to buy product like them.

✓ I like advertising from influencers; they always create creative, good video content that persuades me to want to buy products like the ones they use.

Article and number errors: use plural 'influencers' and plural 'products' or specify 'a product'. 'create a creativity' is wrong; use 'create creative' or 'show creativity'. 'that is persuade me' should be 'that persuades me' (subject-verb agreement). Improve by correcting articles, plural forms, adjective usage, and verb agreement.