Advertisement— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatical, concise and organized. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific types of ads you notice, using linking words. Avoid repetition and use plural/singular correctly.

Ví dụ: Yes. I often see advertisements on my phone and computer. For example, social media ads about people’s personal stories and educational programmes are common, and I also notice cultural or travel ads about different countries.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer naming a specific ad, then explain briefly why it impressed you with clear reasons and one example. Use simple correct sentences and avoid vague phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes. A TV commercial for a children’s shoe brand impressed me when I was young because it showed a child becoming confident after joining a school play. That story stayed with me because it linked the product to bravery and self‑confidence.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give one or two specific observations with linking words (e.g., "for example", "also"). Keep sentences complete and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I see many ads on trains and buses. For example, there are posters for local attractions on train walls and digital screens showing phone and banking services.

Gợi ý: State a clear opinion (yes/no) and explain reasons with specific examples. Use linking words like 'because' or 'however' and avoid unclear words like 'so age'.

Ví dụ: Not really. I don’t like many modern ads because they focus on people’s personal lives and emotional stories, which feels intrusive. However, I do appreciate informative ads about useful products or services.

Gợi ý: Give a clear category of ads you prefer and explain why with one concrete example. Use correct verb forms and simpler vocabulary to express your ideas clearly.

Ví dụ: I prefer educational advertisements. For instance, I like ads for online courses or educational apps because I often use my phone and tablet to study, read reviews, and learn new skills.

× Yeah, I see advertisement when I'm on my phone and computer.

✓ Yeah, I see advertisements when I'm on my phone and computer.

The noun 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' because the speaker refers to seeing many ads in general. Use plural for countable nouns when referring to more than one or to them in general. Suggestion: Use 'advertisements' or 'ads' when mentioning multiple items.

× I see a lot of advertisement about the people in the social medias, about their story, the education, the traditional or culture about any country in this world.

✓ I see a lot of advertisements about people on social media, about their stories, education, and traditions or culture of different countries.

Multiple plural errors: 'a lot of' requires plural noun 'advertisements'; 'the people' can be general 'people'; 'social medias' should be 'social media' (uncountable); 'their story' should be plural 'stories' to match 'people'; 'the traditional or culture' should be 'traditions or culture' and 'about any country in this world' is better as 'of different countries'. Suggestion: Use plural forms and correct uncountable nouns: 'a lot of advertisements on social media about people's stories, education, and traditions.'

× Yes, have the advertisement that might be impression on whenever talk because that what advertisement is feel like the impression on the impression on me because umm they make our investment about the individual that you're tall.

✓ Yes, there were advertisements that made an impression on me when I was a child because they presented stories that impressed me, and they influenced my opinions about tall people.

This sentence has many structural issues: missing subject 'there' and wrong verb tense, unclear phrase 'might be impression on whenever talk' corrected to 'made an impression on me when I was a child', and unclear meaning 'make our investment about the individual that you're tall' guessed as 'influenced my opinions about tall people'. Suggestion: Break into shorter sentences, include clear subjects and verbs, and use past tense when referring to childhood impressions.

× Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport? / I see a lot of advertising on train or other trains, but I see I saw a lot of.

✓ Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport? / I see a lot of advertising on trains and other transport, and I also saw a lot in the past.

Consistency between present and past references: 'train' should be plural 'trains' to match general statement; 'other trains' is redundant so use 'other transport'. The student attempted to mix present and past ('I see I saw a lot of') which is corrected to clearly state present and past observations. Suggestion: Use plural for general counts and separate present and past statements clearly.

× Probably I think no umm, specially the advertisement is always about a lot of story, a lot of umm individual that posting about their life, their problems for other and I think it's so age.

✓ Probably not. I especially dislike advertisements that are always about many stories, with individuals posting about their lives and problems; I think they are childish.

'Probably I think no' is awkward; use 'Probably not.' 'the advertisement is always' should be 'advertisements are always' (plural and agreement). 'a lot of story' should be 'many stories'; 'individual that posting' needs relative clause 'individuals who post'. 'for other' unclear, changed to 'their problems'; 'I think it's so age' likely means 'childish' or 'immature'. Suggestion: Use clear negation ('probably not'), plural agreement, and proper relative clauses ('individuals who post'). Replace vague phrases with precise adjectives like 'childish'.

× Their advertising that I like is the poets that compare to the education because I likes to spending my time on the computer, on my phone or tablet because to recite about the education review Malaysian and research more about the knowledge that make me smart and a good student.

✓ The advertising I like features people who compare topics to education because I like spending my time on the computer, phone, or tablet to read educational reviews about Malaysia and to research knowledge that makes me smarter and a better student.

Pronoun and agreement errors: 'Their advertising' incorrectly uses 'their'; use 'The advertising' or 'The advertisements'. 'is the poets' unclear; likely 'features people' or 'presenters'. 'compare to the education' corrected to 'compare topics to education' or 'relate to education'. 'I likes' should be 'I like' (subject-verb agreement). 'to spending' should be 'spending' or 'to spend'. 'recite about the education review Malaysian' unclear, changed to 'read educational reviews about Malaysia'. 'knowledge that make me smart' corrected to 'knowledge that makes me smarter'. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement ('I like'), use correct pronouns, and simplify unclear phrases into clear verbs like 'read' and 'research'.