Advertisement— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は要点を述べていますが、表現が不自然で文法や語彙の誤りがあります。より自然に、具体的な広告の名前や内容、なぜ印象的だったか（例：歌、キャラクター、映像など）を短く整理して述べてください。接続詞を使って文の流れを改善しましょう（例：because, so, and）。

Ví dụ: Yes. One advertisement I remember from my childhood is for Pocky, a popular snack in Japan. The commercial had a catchy jingle and a cheerful animation, so the melody stayed in my head for years. Because the song was so memorable, I still hum it sometimes.

Gợi ý: 内容は合っていますが、文法と論理のつながりが不明瞭です。主語と動詞の一致や時制を確認し、理由を簡潔に述べましょう。接続詞（because, so, therefore）で因果関係を明確にしてください。また冗長な表現を避けて1〜3文でまとめてください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I see a lot of advertising on trains. Advertisements are placed there because commuters spend a long time on trains, so they have more chance to notice them. Therefore train ads are common and effective in my city.

Gợi ý: 答えは直接的で良いですが、詳細が足りません。なぜ広告を好きなのか、どのように仕事に関連しているのか（例：学びになる、創造的で面白いなど）を具体的に一つか二つの理由で補足してください。接続詞で理由を明確に。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. As a marketing manager, I find advertisements fascinating because they show creative ways to connect with customers. I also learn new strategies from them that I can use in my work.

Gợi ý: 主張は明確ですが、文法ミスと語彙選択の誤りがあります（例：buy のスペル、単複一致）。具体的な理由（例：デザイン、レビュー、成分の説明）や例を加えて、論理的に繋げてください。文は3〜4文以内にまとめましょう。

Ví dụ: I prefer cosmetic advertisements. They often introduce new products and show how they work, so I can decide whether to try them. For example, a video showing before-and-after results helps me decide to buy a new face cream.

Gợi ý: 答えは概ね良いですが、語法と文法の改善が必要です（例：targeting advertisement → targeted advertisements）。具体的な例（どんな広告が有用か、どの点が便利か）を一つ挙げ、接続語で説明をつなげてください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I use social media on my smartphone every day, so I often see targeted advertisements. These ads are useful because they show products related to my interests, like gadgets or skincare, which saves me time when shopping.

× I remember 1 observer popular advertisements in Japan because the song of advertisement is very catchy, so I cannot forget the melody line.

✓ I remember one popular advertisement in Japan because the song of the advertisement is very catchy, so I cannot forget the melody.

Error type: singular/plural and number expression. '1 observer' is incorrect; likely meant 'one' and 'observer' is extraneous. 'Advertisements' should be singular to match 'one'. 'song of advertisement' needs the definite article and 'melody line' is unnatural; use 'melody'. Suggestion: use 'one' for the numeral, keep noun number consistent (one + singular noun), include articles appropriately, and prefer natural collocations like 'song of the advertisement' or 'the advertisement's song'.

× Yes I do. There are many advertisement in train because people stay in a train for a long time, so they watch the they often watched this advertisement.

✓ Yes, I do. There are many advertisements on trains because people stay on a train for a long time, so they often watch these advertisements.

Errors: adjective/adverb and pluralization and preposition use. 'many advertisement' should be 'many advertisements' (plural). 'in train' should be 'on trains' (correct preposition for transport and plural to match generalization). The clause 'so they watch the they often watched this advertisement' is ungrammatical and mixes tenses; use 'so they often watch these advertisements' for present general habit. Suggestion: ensure plural agreement, use 'on' with modes of transport, and keep tense consistent for habits.

× Yes I do because my job is marketing manager so I am familiar with advertisement.

✓ Yes, I do, because my job is a marketing manager, so I am familiar with advertisements.

Error: article and plural errors. 'marketing manager' as a job needs an article 'a' before it. 'familiar with advertisement' should be 'familiar with advertisements' (general noun plural) or 'familiar with advertising'. Suggestion: add indefinite article for occupations and use plural or the uncountable form 'advertising' for general reference.

× I personally think I like cosmetic advertisement. This is because the advertisements promote new product. So sometimes I find this advertisement and by some cosmetics.

✓ I personally think I like cosmetic advertisements. This is because the advertisements promote new products. So sometimes I see these advertisements and buy some cosmetics.

Errors: adjective/adverb and pluralization and word choice. 'cosmetic advertisement' should be plural 'cosmetic advertisements' for general preference. 'new product' should be 'new products' (plural). 'find this advertisement' is awkward; use 'see these advertisements'. 'by' is a spelling/word error for 'buy'. Suggestion: ensure correct plural forms for general statements, use correct verbs (see, buy), and check spelling.

× Yes I do. I use social media on my smartphone every day. There are many targeting advertisement which is very useful for me.

✓ Yes, I do. I use social media on my smartphone every day. There are many targeted advertisements which are very useful for me.

Errors: preposition/word form and pluralization. 'targeting advertisement' is incorrect; use the adjective 'targeted advertisements'. Also plural 'advertisements' matches 'many'. 'which is' should agree with plural: 'which are'. Suggestion: use correct adjective forms (targeted), keep noun number consistent, and ensure subject-verb agreement in relative clauses.