Advertisement— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more specific and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the ad, then give one or two specific details (what happened, why it impressed you) using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words.

Ví dụ: Yes. The advertisement that impressed me was a UMM Madison commercial featuring a popular singer. It used a catchy slogan and a memorable song, which made the ad easy to remember because I associated the tune with the brand.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer then one or two clear supporting details. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and correct basic grammar (e.g., 'I see' not 'I always show', 'posters' or 'ads' instead of 'adverts on the wall'). Remove unnecessary phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I see a lot of advertising on the MRT. For example, there are posters and digital screens on the walls and doors, so I often read them to pass the time when the journey is boring.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and explain reasons with clear linking words. Avoid fillers and unclear phrases. Give specific examples of what you find interesting and what you find annoying (e.g., repetitive pop-ups, targeted ads).

Ví dụ: It depends. I like creative ads that tell a story because they are entertaining; however, I dislike repetitive targeted ads on social media because they interrupt my browsing and show the same product too often.

Gợi ý: Be clearer about the type of ads you prefer and give a specific reason. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'public service announcements' instead of 'adverse') and one or two concrete examples. Keep it concise and use linking words like 'for example' or 'because'.

Ví dụ: I prefer public service announcements, for example campaigns about fire safety or traffic rules, because they provide useful information and make me feel that the government cares about public safety.

Gợi ý: Respond directly and add a clear reason with one specific example of the ad type (video ads, pop-ups, sponsored posts). Avoid misused words ('admins') and fillers. Use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to connect reason and feeling.

Ví dụ: Yes, I see many ads on my phone, especially sponsored posts and short video ads in my social media feeds, so I often find them annoying because they interrupt what I'm doing.

× I remember an advertisement about UMM Madison and singer sing a song with some slogan and a song, so it made the advertisements impressive.

✓ I remember an advertisement about UMM Madison with a singer singing a song that had a slogan, so the advertisement was impressive.

The original sentence uses 'singer sing' which is incorrect; the correct form is 'singer singing' (present participle) to show the singer performing the action. Also make 'advertisements' singular to match 'an advertisement' and revise word order for clarity. Suggestion: use 'singer singing' and keep nouns consistent.

× Yes, definitely when I take the MRT I always show a lot of adverts on the wall of the MRT and some efforts is really interesting and if I feel boring I will see it at the price for some fun.

✓ Yes, definitely. When I take the MRT I always see a lot of adverts on the walls of the MRT, and some of them are really interesting; if I feel bored I will look at them for some fun.

Several issues: 'show' is incorrect verb here; use 'see'. 'Wall' should be plural 'walls' when referring to many adverts. 'Some efforts is' is incorrect—intended meaning is 'some of them are' (plural agreement). 'Feel boring' should be 'feel bored' (adjective form). Also 'see it at the price' is unclear; corrected to 'look at them for some fun'. Suggestions: use correct verb 'see', ensure subject-verb agreement, choose correct adjective forms.

× Umm, it depends. I see a lot of adverts are quite interesting with some creative ideas, but some adverts are quite annoying because when I umm say uh uh in social media, some adverts completely uh, repeat.

✓ Umm, it depends. I find many adverts quite interesting because of their creative ideas, but some adverts are quite annoying because, when I use social media, some adverts repeat constantly.

Original mixes 'I see a lot of adverts are' which is ungrammatical; use 'I find many adverts' or 'I see that many adverts are'. 'When I umm say uh uh in social media' is incorrect verb and wording; intended meaning is 'when I use social media'. 'Completely repeat' is awkward; use 'repeat constantly'. Suggestions: use 'find' or 'see that' to state opinion, use 'use social media' for the action, and adverb 'constantly' to describe repetition.

× I like, umm, the adverse about, uh, teaching people to remind, uh, fire alarm or, uh, traffic, uh, tapes and, and it gave me a sense the government.

✓ I like, umm, the adverts about safety, such as reminders about fire alarms or traffic rules, and they give me a sense of trust in the government.

Multiple preposition and word choice problems: 'adverse' should be 'adverts'. 'Teaching people to remind' is incorrect; use 'reminders about' or 'adverts that remind people about'. 'Traffic tapes' is unclear—better 'traffic rules' or 'traffic safety'. 'It gave me a sense the government' lacks preposition and is ungrammatical; correct is 'a sense of trust in the government'. Suggestions: use 'adverts about' + noun phrase, replace unclear words with 'traffic rules', and include 'of' after 'sense'.

× Yes, definitely. When I'm using my social media app I see a lot of admins inside, uh, the personal pages and it's hard to not notice that, so I feel annoying about it.

✓ Yes, definitely. When I'm using my social media apps I see a lot of ads on personal pages, and it's hard not to notice them, so I find them annoying.

Mistakes: 'admins' is incorrect for 'ads' (advertisements). 'Inside the personal pages' is better as 'on personal pages'. 'It's hard to not notice that' is awkward; prefer 'it's hard not to notice them'. 'I feel annoying' incorrectly uses adjective for subject; correct is 'I find them annoying' or 'they annoy me'. Suggestions: use 'ads' for adverts, 'on personal pages', and 'I find them annoying'.