Advertisement— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add 1–2 concise, specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words (uh, um) and unclear phrases. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., chewing gum, brand name) and simple past tense to describe a childhood impression. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes. One advertisement that impressed me as a child was for a chewing gum brand called "Happy Dent." In the ad, a man chewed the gum at night and then smiled, and his teeth began to sparkle brightly. I remembered it because the shining teeth looked magical and made the product seem special.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct answer (Yes/No) and then give a specific reason and an example. Use linking words like "because" or "however" to connect ideas. Avoid hesitations and redundant phrases. Mention specific places where you do see ads (billboards, bus stops, trains) to be more precise.

Ví dụ: Not really. Because I usually travel by car for work, I mainly notice billboards and posters beside roads rather than ads on trains. However, I do sometimes see adverts on buses and at bus stops when I visit the city center.

Gợi ý: Give a direct opinion then support it with one clear reason and an example. Use linking words such as "because" or "for example." Remove filler words and repeat words. Use more precise adjectives (e.g., annoying, distracting) instead of vague phrases.

Ví dụ: No, I don't really like advertisements because they interrupt movies and break my concentration. For example, when I watch a film at the cinema, long ad breaks make it hard to stay engaged with the story.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give specific reasons why you like that type of advertising, using linking words like "because" and "so." Use correct grammar for conditionals and preference (e.g., "if I think it will suit me, I'll try it"). Keep sentences concise and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: I prefer advertisements for beauty products because they often demonstrate how to use the products and list their benefits. If I think a product will suit my skin, I am more likely to try it or buy a small sample.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct 'Yes' or 'No' and follow with specific examples (social media, apps, websites). Explain how ads affect your experience using linking words like "for example" or "because." Avoid vague phrases and filler words; be concise and specific about where and how ads appear.

Ví dụ: Yes, I see many ads online, especially on social media and in mobile apps. For example, short video and banner ads often interrupt my browsing or gaming sessions, which can be frustrating because they break the flow of what I'm doing.

× Yes, I do remember advertisement uh, in which a man used to aid a train gram, uh, some, uh, I maybe its name was happy dent And when he used to choose the chewing gum and it was the night time, it was very dark and suddenly after showing, uh, after chewing it, uh, he's just smiled and uh, his feet started uh, shining like, uh.

✓ Yes, I do remember an advertisement in which a man used to advertise a chewing gum; I think its name was Happy Dent. When he used to choose the chewing gum at night it was very dark, and suddenly after chewing it he would smile and his teeth started shining.

Errors: missing articles ('an advertisement'), incorrect verb choice ('aid a train gram' unclear; corrected to 'advertise a chewing gum'), inconsistent tense and form ('he's just smiled' -> 'he would smile'), incorrect noun ('feet' should be 'teeth'), unnecessary fillers. Suggestion: Use appropriate nouns, correct present participle/past habitual forms ('used to' + base verb), ensure subject matches the body part (teeth), and include articles where required.

× As I'm a working person so I travel by car and when I'm traveling I could see some advertisements on the boards outside the roads. Uh, other than I don't see any advertisement.

✓ As I am a working person, I travel by car, and when I am traveling I can see some advertisements on the boards beside the road. Other than that, I do not see any advertisements.

Errors: unnecessary 'so' after cause clause, incorrect modal 'could' used for general present ('can' is correct), wrong preposition 'outside the roads' -> 'beside the road' or 'along the road', missing determiner 'that' in 'other than that', plural agreement 'advertisements'. Suggestion: Use 'as' or 'since' for reason without adding 'so', use 'can' for ability in present, choose correct prepositions for location, and match singular/plural.

× Honestly speaking, I don't like advertisements, especially when I'm watching a movie because it interrupts, uh, the interest of that, uh, movie and it's a little bit irritating at that time. So, umm, I don't like advertisement much.

✓ Honestly, I do not like advertisements, especially when I am watching a movie because they interrupt the movie and are a little irritating. So, I do not like advertisements very much.

Errors: subject-pronoun agreement and number ('it interrupts the interest of that movie' -> 'they interrupt the movie'), inconsistent singular/plural 'advertisement' -> 'advertisements', awkward phrase 'the interest of that movie'. Suggestion: Use plural pronouns to match plural noun, simplify phrasing ('interrupt the movie'), and use 'very much' for emphasis.

× I do like advertisement which, uh, shows some beauty products and uh, by which I get all knowledge about the products and even if I feel it's suits my, it might suit me, so I'll try to buy it.

✓ I do like advertisements that show beauty products because they give me complete information about the products. If I feel a product might suit me, I will try to buy it.

Errors: incorrect article and number ('advertisement' -> 'advertisements'), incorrect relative pronoun 'which' better replaced with 'that' for defining clauses, awkward phrase 'get all knowledge about', incorrect use 'it's suits my' (wrong pronoun and verb form). Suggestion: Use plural nouns and matching pronouns, use 'give information' instead of 'get knowledge', ensure subject-verb agreement ('it suits me' or 'might suit me').

× Yes, I do come through many advertisements uh, some are commercial, some are about some cosmetic products, but sometimes it's very interruptive through the online applications because we are indulged to uh, some activities so.

✓ Yes, I come across many advertisements; some are commercials and some are about cosmetic products, but sometimes they are very interruptive in online applications because we are engaged in other activities.

Errors: wrong collocation 'come through' -> 'come across', 'some are commercial' -> 'commercials' or 'are commercial', 'it's very interruptive' -> 'they are very interruptive' (number agreement), wrong preposition 'through the online applications' -> 'in online applications', incorrect verb 'indulged to' -> 'engaged in'. Suggestion: Use correct collocations ('come across'), match pronouns to nouns, use 'engaged in' for activities, and use plural where needed.