Talents— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct with a clear topic sentence, simplify grammar, and give one specific example. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Focus on accuracy (verb forms, articles) and clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes. I have a strong talent for learning and remembering information. For example, when I study a chapter once, I can recall most key points in exams. Because of this, I usually finish revision faster than classmates and feel confident in tests.

Gợi ý: Answer directly (past or childhood), use correct tense and a brief timeline, and give one clear supporting detail. Keep sentences short and linked logically.

Ví dụ: I developed this ability when I was young. I started practicing memorization techniques at around age eight and have used them while studying for over ten years, so it is a long-standing skill.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear opinion sentence, then give specific reasons and an example of how the talent helps in a workplace. Use linking words (because, for example, therefore).

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe it will help my future career because good memory makes learning new tasks faster. For example, in my first job I could quickly remember company procedures and client details, which improved my productivity.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, clarify the inheritance idea with careful language (likely rather than certain), and provide specific contrasting examples of each family member's memory. Use linking words to compare.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think so. My parents both have strong memories, so I may have inherited it. For example, my mother is excellent with numbers and bills, while my father remembers names and personal details about family and friends.

× Yes, I have especially for studying because I'm easily remember everything when I after learning, so I have a very good memory to remember everything, that's why I'm.

✓ Yes. I am especially good at studying because I easily remember everything after learning; I have a very good memory, that's why.

Errors: incorrect use of present participle form and general verb forms ('I'm easily remember' is ungrammatical). The student attempted to use 'I'm' + verb but should use 'I easily remember' (simple present) to express a habitual ability. Also 'when I after learning' is redundant and incorrect; use 'after learning'. Suggestion: use simple present for general abilities (I easily remember), remove redundant phrases, and join clauses with punctuation or conjunctions.

× When I am young, I mustered it because I've been studying for a long time, maybe 10 years or over 10 years. So it's not recently I've especially I.

✓ When I was young, I mastered it because I've been studying for a long time, maybe 10 years or more. So it is not recent.

Errors: incorrect tense 'When I am young' should be past 'When I was young'. 'mustered' is a wrong word form; the correct past tense of 'master' is 'mastered'. 'over 10 years' is acceptable but 'more' is more natural. The fragment 'So it's not recently I've especially I' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'So it is not recent.' Suggestion: use past tense for past time references, choose correct verbs (master vs muster), and simplify unclear fragments.

× I think my talent is very useful for my future because it's useful for starting a new job. So after graduate I will start working in a company so with good memory.

✓ I think my talent will be very useful for my future because it helps when starting a new job. After graduation I will start working in a company, and my good memory will help me.

Errors: tense and noun form issues. 'is very useful for my future' is acceptable, but 'will be very useful' fits future orientation. 'after graduate' is incorrect; use the noun 'after graduation'. The sentence 'so with good memory' is a fragment and unclear; include subject and verb ('my good memory will help me'). Suggestion: use 'graduation' for the event, use future tense when referring to future outcomes, and write full clauses.

× Yes, I believe my parents also have their good memories so I think it's inherited to me.

✓ Yes, I believe my parents also have good memories, so I think this trait was inherited by me.

Errors: pronoun and passive construction issues. 'their good memories' is acceptable but 'this trait' clarifies the referent. 'it's inherited to me' is incorrect; use passive 'was inherited by me' or active 'runs in my family'. Suggestion: clarify the subject with a noun ('this trait') and use correct passive preposition 'by' for inheritance, or use active phrasing.

× My mum is very good at remembering especially the numbers and currents and also my father is very good at remembering personal.

✓ My mum is very good at remembering numbers and currents, and my father is also very good at remembering personal information.

Errors: word choice and adjective/adverb placement. 'especially the numbers and currents' needs restructuring; 'especially' should modify the clause properly. 'remembering personal' is incomplete; use 'personal information'. Suggestion: place 'especially' before the specific items or omit it, and use the correct noun phrase 'personal information' to complete the idea.