Art— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like drawing?
Thí sinh
Personally I don't really like drawing because I not good at it moreover I think I find it difficult to pen tow draw so that I often look at others such as my friends or artists on the internet to see their
Giám khảo
Do you like to go to the gallery?
Thí sinh
Good job! - Content & coherence: Your answer directly addresses the question and includes a personal reason and a brief example, which is good. The idea that you enjoy artists’ use of unusual colors and materials and the anecdote about visiting a gallery with friends create a clear response. - Fluency & pronunciation (inferred from STT): The transcript is generally fluent. There are small hesitations implied (missing function words) but overall the answer is easy to follow. - Lexical resource: You used some good vocabulary (unusual colors, materials, spread their ideas). Consider adding a little more varied language (e.g., “creative techniques,” “express their messages,” “modern/contemporary art”). - Grammatical range & accuracy: There are a few grammar issues: missing articles and verb forms (e.g., “I like go to” should be “I like going to” or “I like to go to”; “artists use” is okay but context needs an article before “artists” in some constructions). Also “although I don't understand all meanings in the pictures” is understandable but could be more natural. Improvement suggestions: (in Vietnamese, with necessary English parts) - Sửa ngữ pháp động từ: dùng “like going to” hoặc “like to go to” thay vì “like go to”. - Thêm mạo từ khi cần: “the gallery in Hojime City” là đúng; còn “artists use” giữ được nhưng có thể nói “the artists use” nếu bạn ám chỉ những nghệ sĩ ấy cụ thể. - Làm câu tự nhiên hơn bằng cách nối ý: thêm liên từ hoặc mệnh đề nhỏ để giải thích vì sao bạn thích.
Giám khảo
Do you want to learn more about art?
Thí sinh
Yes, I would like to learn more about art because I think art is a vital life skill, especially for children because it helps our chew relative. Moreover, it helps me to relaxing. So if I have chance to learn more about it, I will use this opportunities to
Giám khảo
Did you learn drawing when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I was in public school my teacher taught how to use colors and different materials to express our ideas. I enjoyed drawing with my friends because we like experimenting with new techniques and creating fun picture scatter.
Giám khảo
Do you like art?
Thí sinh
Yes, personally I really like art, although I don't really good at it however I still love them. Sometimes I go to garlic to really look at other bandings. I like how scientists use and use of color and different materials to spread their ideas. So I really liked
Giám khảo
Do you want to be an artist?
Thí sinh
Yes, I would like to be an artist, however I am not good at drawing so I could prefer penns as a hoppy model professionally in this field.
Giám khảo
Do you like modern art or traditional art?
Thí sinh
Personally, I like modern art because I like seeing artists use unusual colors, materials or serves to express their ideas. So So although traditional as a beautiful Jew, I am more eagistic in modern art.
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Part 1
Do you like drawing?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp nhưng câu bị ngắt giữa chừng và có lỗi ngữ pháp khiến ý khó hiểu. Dùng “I’m not good at it” thay cho “I not good at it”, và diễn đạt rõ điều bạn thấy khó (ví dụ: “I find it difficult to draw accurately”). Hoàn thành câu bằng một chi tiết cụ thể; dùng “Moreover” hoặc “so” để nối ý, không dùng cả hai thiếu dấu câu.
Ví dụ: I don’t really enjoy drawing because I’m not very good at it. I find it difficult to draw people accurately, so I usually look at artwork by my friends or artists online for inspiration.
Do you like to go to the gallery?
Điểm: 5.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời được ghi lại là “Good job!”, nên chưa trả lời câu hỏi về việc bạn có thích đi phòng trưng bày hay không. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó nêu lý do và một chi tiết cụ thể. Phần nhận xét xuất hiện sau câu này có vẻ là phản hồi đánh giá, không phải câu trả lời của bạn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy going to art galleries, especially with my friends. I like seeing how artists use unusual colors and materials to express their ideas, even when I don’t understand every detail of a painting.
Do you want to learn more about art?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm và đưa ra lý do, nhưng câu cuối bị bỏ dở và cụm “helps our chew relative” không rõ nghĩa. Hãy thay bằng lợi ích cụ thể, chẳng hạn “helps children develop creativity”, và sửa “helps me to relaxing” thành “helps me relax”. Dùng “if I have the chance” và hoàn tất ý định của bạn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I’d like to learn more about art because it can help children develop their creativity. I also find making art relaxing. If I had the chance, I’d take a class to learn more about different techniques.
Did you learn drawing when you were a kid?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có nội dung phù hợp và chi tiết về giáo viên, vật liệu cũng như việc vẽ cùng bạn bè. Hãy thêm “us” trong “taught us how to”, đổi “we like” thành “we liked” để thống nhất thì quá khứ, và sửa “fun picture scatter” thành một cụm tự nhiên như “fun pictures”. Có thể thêm dấu phẩy sau mệnh đề mở đầu.
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was in primary school, my teacher taught us how to use different colors and materials to express our ideas. I enjoyed drawing with my friends because we liked trying new techniques and making fun pictures together.
Do you like art?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Bạn có nêu rõ mình thích nghệ thuật, nhưng nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ ngữ làm câu trả lời khó hiểu. Sửa “I don’t really good at it” thành “I’m not very good at it”; tránh dùng “although” và “however” cùng lúc; dùng “art” thay cho “them”. Một số từ như “garlic”, “bandings” và “scientists” có vẻ bị nhận dạng sai—hãy kiểm tra phát âm và chọn từ đúng, chẳng hạn “gallery”, “paintings” và “artists”.
Ví dụ: Yes, I really like art, even though I’m not very good at creating it myself. I sometimes visit galleries to look at paintings. I especially enjoy seeing how artists use color and different materials to express their ideas.
Do you want to be an artist?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: Bạn trả lời được câu hỏi nhưng ý ở nửa sau chưa rõ và có các cụm có vẻ bị nhận dạng sai như “penns as a hoppy model”. Dùng dấu chấm hoặc “but” để nối hai ý, và nói rõ bạn muốn theo đuổi nghệ thuật như sở thích hay nghề nghiệp. Nếu ý bạn là vẽ không phải thế mạnh, có thể nói “I’d rather keep art as a hobby”.
Ví dụ: I’d like to become an artist, but I’m not very good at drawing at the moment. I’d probably keep art as a hobby and practise more before considering it as a career.
Do you like modern art or traditional art?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Bạn đã chọn modern art và đưa ra lý do cụ thể, đây là điểm tốt. Sửa “serves” thành từ phù hợp với ý muốn nói (có thể là “shapes” hoặc “styles”), bỏ phần lặp “So So”, và diễn đạt ý đối lập rõ hơn: “Although traditional art is beautiful, I prefer modern art.” Cụm cuối hiện chưa tự nhiên và có vẻ bị nhận dạng sai.
Ví dụ: Personally, I prefer modern art because I enjoy seeing artists use unusual colors, materials, and shapes to express their ideas. Traditional art is beautiful too, but modern art feels more creative and surprising to me.
Ngữ pháp
× Personally I don't really like drawing because I not good at it moreover I think I find it difficult to pen tow draw so that I often look at others such as my friends or artists on the internet to see their
✓ Personally, I don't really like drawing because I'm not good at it. Moreover, I find it difficult to draw, so I often look at others, such as my friends or artists on the internet, to see their work.
The clause because I not good at it is missing the present-tense linking verb am. Use I'm not good at it. The transcript also appears to contain recognition errors and an unfinished ending; the correction uses the likely intended wording and completes the final phrase for clarity.
× Moreover, it helps me to relaxing.
✓ Moreover, it helps me relax.
After help + object, use the base form of the verb or a to-infinitive. Use relax, not relaxing. You could also say it helps me to relax.
× So if I have chance to learn more about it,
✓ So if I have a chance to learn more about it,
Chance is a singular countable noun here, so it needs an article. Use a chance.
× I will use this opportunities to
✓ I will use this opportunity to learn more about it.
This is used with a singular noun, while opportunities is plural. Use this opportunity. The original phrase also stops before completing the idea, so the correction completes it using the context.
× When I was in public school my teacher taught how to use colors and different materials to express our ideas.
✓ When I was in public school, my teacher taught us how to use colors and different materials to express our ideas.
The verb taught normally needs to identify who was taught. Add us before how to use. A comma after the introductory when-clause also makes the sentence easier to read.
× I enjoyed drawing with my friends because we like experimenting with new techniques and creating fun picture scatter.
✓ I enjoyed drawing with my friends because we liked experimenting with new techniques and creating fun pictures.
The sentence describes a past experience, so like should also be in the past tense: liked. The final words appear to contain transcription errors; pictures is used here as the likely intended noun.
× Yes, personally I really like art, although I don't really good at it however I still love them.
✓ Yes, personally, I really like art. Although I'm not really good at it, I still love it.
The phrase I don't really good is missing the linking verb am; the correct form is I'm not really good. Art is treated as an uncountable singular noun here, so use it rather than them. Also, although and however should not be used together to connect these clauses in this structure.
× I still love them.
✓ I still love it.
The pronoun refers to art, which is singular and uncountable in this context. Use it rather than them.
× So I really liked
✓ So I really like it.
The answer describes a current opinion, so use the present tense like rather than the past tense liked. The original phrase is also incomplete; it needs an object such as it.
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