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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like looking at yourself in the mirror? How often?

Thí sinh

Not really to be honest. I guess when I look at the mirror I can spot some flowers and things that I will change through a surgery. So that's why I am not a big fan of looking myself at the mirror.

Giám khảo

Have you ever bought mirrors?

Thí sinh

No, I haven't. They are very expensive. So I am not a big fan of purchasing these expensive items and I think I've never needed because every house that I've moved in there was a very big and centered mirror.

Giám khảo

Do you usually take a mirror with you?

Thí sinh

No, I don't. I guess that if I want to see my reflection I can just get my camera and try to make a selfie so that way I can check if my teeth are blurry or if there is any neck in my nose.

Giám khảo

Would you use mirrors to decorate your room?

Thí sinh

Yes, I would. I guess when you place a mirror in your room, it seems that the closeness of the room is limited. So I guess that I would place a mirror.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like looking at yourself in the mirror? How often?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: Melhore a clareza e a correção gramatical da resposta. Comece com uma frase-tópico direta (por exemplo: "Not really, I rarely look in the mirror") e depois acrescente uma ou duas frases de apoio com detalhes específicos e conectores adequados. Corrija erros como "looking myself at the mirror" para "looking at myself in the mirror" e substitua frases vagas ("some flowers and things") por descrições precisas. Mantém a resposta sucinta (máx. 4–5 frases).

Ví dụ: Not really, I rarely look at myself in the mirror. When I do, it's often because I notice things I'd like to change surgically, such as a small scar on my chin or my nose shape. For that reason, I don't enjoy checking my reflection often.

Have you ever bought mirrors?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: Torne a resposta mais natural e coesa. Use uma frase-tópico clara ("No, I haven’t") seguida de razões específicas e exemplos, usando conectores como "because" ou "since". Corrija estruturas como "every house that I've moved in there was" para "every house I've lived in had". Evite repetição de "expensive" e mantenha a resposta dentro de 3–4 frases.

Ví dụ: No, I haven't. I find them quite expensive and unnecessary, since every home I've lived in already had a large, centrally placed mirror. For that reason I never felt the need to buy one myself.

Do you usually take a mirror with you?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Melhore a precisão e a naturalidade. Comece com uma resposta direta e corrija expressões estranhas como "teeth are blurry" e "any neck in my nose". Use vocabulário apropriado (e.g. "check my teeth" ou "check my profile") e um conector simples. Seja específico sobre quando ou por que faz uma selfie em vez de usar um espelho.

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually carry a mirror. If I need to check my appearance I just take a quick selfie with my phone to see my teeth or my profile. It's more convenient than carrying a separate mirror.

Would you use mirrors to decorate your room?

Điểm: 66.0

Gợi ý: Explique mais claramente a vantagem decorativa e use vocabulário preciso. Comece com uma frase-tópico firme ("Yes, I would") e explique por que (e.g. "they make a room look bigger and brighter"). Use conectores como "because" e dê um exemplo concreto de onde colocaria o espelho. Evite repetição de "I guess".

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. Mirrors can make a small room look bigger and reflect more light, so I would place a large mirror opposite a window to create a brighter, more spacious feel.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Not really to be honest.

Not really, to be honest.

Comma needed after introductory phrase for clarity; no grammatical pronoun error here but punctuation improves sentence flow.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I guess when I look at the mirror I can spot some flowers and things that I will change through a surgery.

I guess when I look in the mirror I can spot some flaws and things that I would change through surgery.

Use 'in the mirror' not 'at the mirror' and 'flaws' instead of 'flowers' (likely typo). Use 'would' to express hypothetical future change and omit 'a' before 'surgery'. Suggestion: say 'I would change through surgery' or 'I might change surgically' for clarity.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× So that's why I am not a big fan of looking myself at the mirror.

So that's why I'm not a big fan of looking at myself in the mirror.

Correct word order is 'looking at myself in the mirror'. Use contraction 'I'm' optional. 'At myself' before 'in the mirror' and preposition 'in' for mirror.

Past tense issue

× No, I haven't.

No, I haven't.

The answer is acceptable as present perfect; no change needed. Kept to indicate experience up to now.

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× They are very expensive.

They are quite expensive.

Original sentence is grammatically correct; 'quite' is stylistic. No grammatical error; kept meaning.

Sentence structure errors

× So I am not a big fan of purchasing these expensive items and I think I've never needed because every house that I've moved in there was a very big and centered mirror.

So I'm not a big fan of purchasing expensive items, and I think I've never needed one because every house I've moved into had a large, centrally placed mirror.

Problems: article and pronoun use, incorrect verb tense and preposition. Use 'one' to refer to 'mirror', 'moved into' (not 'moved in'), and past simple 'had' to describe past states. 'Large, centrally placed mirror' corrects wording 'big and centered' and fixes adjective order.

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× Do you usually take a mirror with you?

Do you usually take a mirror with you?

Question is correct as written; no grammatical correction required.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× No, I don't.

No, I don't.

Answer is fine; no correction needed.

Verb + -ing form

× I guess that if I want to see my reflection I can just get my camera and try to make a selfie so that way I can check if my teeth are blurry or if there is any neck in my nose.

I guess that if I want to see my reflection I can just use my camera and take a selfie so I can check if my teeth look blurry or if there is any bump on my nose.

Use 'use my camera' and 'take a selfie' rather than 'get my camera' and 'make a selfie'. 'Teeth are blurry' is incorrect collocation; use 'teeth look blurry'. 'Any neck in my nose' is nonsensical—likely meant 'bump on my nose'. Also streamline 'so that way' to 'so'.

Modal verb usage

× Would you use mirrors to decorate your room?

Would you use mirrors to decorate your room?

Question is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

Incorrect comparison object

× Yes, I would. I guess when you place a mirror in your room, it seems that the closeness of the room is limited. So I guess that I would place a mirror.

Yes, I would. I guess when you place a mirror in your room, it makes the room seem less cramped. So I would place a mirror.

'Closeness of the room is limited' is awkward. Use 'makes the room seem less cramped' to express increased perceived space. Remove redundant 'I guess' and simplify repetition.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BigLarge; Elder; Important; Ambitious
ExpensiveCostly
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