Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like eating fish?
Thí sinh
Honestly speaking, I am a vegetarian but I loves eating fish because fish is very taste of fish is very sweet and uh when I'm my mom cook, eat, I love eat and I find it it's delicious.
Giám khảo
Have you been to the fish market?
Thí sinh
If I remember about it, in your opinion, I didn't go to the fish market because it's not interesting for me most of the time, just my father buy it for us and I didn't go there.
Giám khảo
Is fishing popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Definitely yes. Fishing is very popular in my country. In every town has many kind of fishing pool and early people would like to go there and. Take me. Kind of.
Do you like eating fish?
Điểm: 46.0Gợi ý: Javob ravon va grammatik jihatdan toʻgʻri boʻlishi kerak. Siz birinchi jumlada aniq fikrni bildirishingiz, soʻngra nimani yoqtirishingizni va nima uchun ekanligini qisqacha sabab bilan tushuntirishingiz lozim. Grammatik xatolarni tuzatish (masalan, 'I am a vegetarian but I like eating fish', 'the taste is sweet', 'when my mom cooks it') va keraksiz takrorlardan qochish zarur. Jumla uzunligi 2–4 ta gapdan oshmasligi kerak.
Ví dụ: I am actually a vegetarian, but I do enjoy eating fish sometimes because it tastes mild and fresh. When my mother cooks fish at home, I find it especially delicious because she seasons it simply and cooks it well.
Have you been to the fish market?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Savolga aniq va toʻgʻri javob berish kerak. Boshlanishda befarqlik yoki noaniq iboralardan (masalan, 'If I remember about it, in your opinion') qoching. Oddiy, toʻgʻri tuzilgan gap bilan boshlang va qisqacha sababni bering. Bogʻlovchi soʻzlardan foydalaning (for example, 'because', 'so') va takrorlardan tiyiling.
Ví dụ: No, I haven't been to the fish market. My father usually buys fish for the family, so I rarely need to go there and I don't find it very interesting.
Is fishing popular in your country?
Điểm: 56.0Gợi ý: Javobni aniq boshlang va qoʻshimcha tafsilotlarni izchil ravishda keltiring. Grammatik jihatdan toʻgʻri tuzilmalarni ishlating (masalan, 'every town has many kinds of fishing spots', 'older people like to go there'). Bogʻlovchi soʻzlar yordamida gaplarni bogʻlang va misollar bilan boyiting. Keraksiz toʻxtovlar va boʻlaklangan gaplardan saqlaning.
Ví dụ: Yes, fishing is very popular in my country. Many towns have fishing spots or ponds, and older people often go there regularly for relaxation and socializing.
× Honestly speaking, I am a vegetarian but I loves eating fish because fish is very taste of fish is very sweet and uh when I'm my mom cook, eat, I love eat and I find it it's delicious.
✓ Honestly speaking, I am a vegetarian but I love eating fish because fish is very tasty and when my mom cooks it, I love to eat it and I find it delicious.
The sentence contains multiple grammatical errors: 'loves' is wrong because the subject I requires base form 'love' (third person singular error but corrected here as verb form for subject). 'Very taste of fish is very sweet' is ungrammatical; use adjective 'tasty' or phrase 'the taste of fish is sweet'. 'When I'm my mom cook, eat' is incorrect word order and missing verbs; correct form is 'when my mom cooks it'. Also 'I love eat' needs the infinitive 'to eat' or the -ing form 'eating' after 'love'. Suggestions: use correct verb forms for subjects (I + love), use appropriate adjectives ('tasty'), keep correct word order (when my mom cooks it), and use 'to' before base verb after 'love' if preferred.
× If I remember about it, in your opinion, I didn't go to the fish market because it's not interesting for me most of the time, just my father buy it for us and I didn't go there.
✓ If I remember correctly, I didn't go to the fish market because it is not interesting to me most of the time; my father just buys it for us, so I don't go there.
Problems include awkward phrase 'If I remember about it, in your opinion' which should be 'If I remember correctly'. 'Just my father buy it' has subject-verb agreement and tense errors; use 'my father just buys it' (present simple) because it is a habitual action. Also mix of past and present tenses was confusing; keep present for habitual facts ('it is not interesting', 'my father buys', 'I don't go'). Suggestion: use 'remember correctly' for memory, match tense and subject-verb agreement for habitual actions, and simplify sentence structure.
× Definitely yes. Fishing is very popular in my country. In every town has many kind of fishing pool and early people would like to go there and. Take me. Kind of.
✓ Definitely yes. Fishing is very popular in my country. In every town there are many kinds of fishing ponds, and people like to go there, especially in the morning.
Errors: 'In every town has many kind of fishing pool' is incorrect word order and noun forms; correct is 'In every town there are many kinds of fishing ponds'. 'Many kind' should be 'many kinds' or 'many types'. 'Fishing pool' is better as 'fishing pond' or 'fishing spot'. Fragmented phrases 'and. Take me. Kind of.' are incomplete and unclear; they should be combined into a complete clause such as 'and people like to go there'. 'Early' should be 'in the morning' or 'early in the morning'. Suggestions: use correct existential construction 'there are', pluralize nouns when needed ('kinds'), avoid sentence fragments, and use clear temporal expressions.