Science— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and clarity: start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No), give a brief reason, and avoid repetition. Use correct verb forms and articles. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: To be honest, I don't like science because I usually get low marks in tests. As a result, I feel frustrated when I study it.

Gợi ý: Use past tense consistently and provide a clear chronological statement followed by one specific supporting detail. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' for coherence.

Ví dụ: I started learning science in grade 8 because it was the first year we had a separate science class. At that time I felt stressed because the lessons moved quickly and I struggled to understand them.

Gợi ý: Be specific and consistent: pick one subject (e.g., biology or botany), use correct nouns, and explain why with a clear example. Avoid mixing topics (planes vs plants).

Ví dụ: I'm most interested in botany because I enjoy learning about how plants grow and produce flowers and fruit. For example, I like studying pollination and how different conditions affect fruit production.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer about a specific activity and describe it briefly. Correct vocabulary (e.g., 'genes' or 'genetics') and avoid repeating dislike of science. Use 2–3 sentences with a linking word.

Ví dụ: Although I don't usually enjoy science, I recently learned about plant genetics. I read a short article about how genes determine flower color, which I found fascinating.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and add a brief reason and an example. Use correct verb forms and smoother phrasing (watch vs watching).

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually watch science TV programs because I find psychology shows more interesting. For example, I often watch documentaries about human behavior and mental processes.

Gợi ý: Answer by separating your lack of knowledge about China from your local observation. Use clear sentence structure and correct articles. Provide one specific example or frequency word (often/sometimes).

Ví dụ: I'm not sure about Chinese people, but in Vietnam many families often take their children to science museums during holidays. For example, my family visited a science center last summer where my younger cousins enjoyed the hands-on exhibits.

× Well to be honest I'm not really like science because I always get bad score inside in when I have the test.

✓ Well, to be honest, I don't really like science because I always get bad scores when I have tests.

Errors: incorrect verb usage ('I'm not really like' should be 'I don't really like'), singular/plural ('bad score' -> 'bad scores'), extraneous words ('inside in' removed), article/word choice ('the test' -> 'tests'). Suggestion: Use correct negative verb form for 'like' with do/does, match noun number to meaning, remove unnecessary filler words, and use plural for general repeated events. Grammar types: subject-verb structure (26), singular/plural issue (1).

× I start to learn about science when I go when I in grade 8 and I feel really stressed and I didn't understand anything when I study science.

✓ I started to learn about science when I was in grade 8, and I felt really stressed because I didn't understand anything when I studied science.

Errors: tense consistency — use past tense for past events ('start'->'started', 'go'/'in' -> 'was in', 'feel'->'felt', 'study'->'studied'). Also remove repeated 'when I go when I'. Suggestion: Keep all verbs in past tense for experiences that happened in the past and correct auxiliary verbs for location/time ('was in grade 8'). Grammar types: past tense issue (5), sentence structure errors (26).

× The science subjects that I interested in is about planes because I feel really excited when I just watch.

✓ The science subjects that I am interested in are about plants because I feel really excited when I just watch them.

Errors: missing auxiliary 'am' with 'interested' ('I interested'->'I am interested'), subject-verb agreement ('subjects... is' -> 'subjects... are'), word choice ('planes' likely 'plants'), missing object pronoun ('watch' -> 'watch them'). Suggestion: Use correct verb forms and ensure subject and verb agree in number; include appropriate auxiliary verbs and object pronouns. Grammar types: incorrect use of pronouns (12), subject-verb agreement errors (27), sentence structure errors (26).

× I already want to know all the name of the plant and how they make the flower and the fruit.

✓ I already want to know the names of plants and how they produce flowers and fruits.

Errors: singular/plural mismatch ('all the name' -> 'the names'), article misuse ('the plant' -> 'plants' or 'the plants' depending), incorrect verb ('make' -> 'produce'), singular/plural for 'flower'/'fruit' -> plural. Suggestion: Match nouns and verbs in number and choose more natural verbs for biological processes ('produce'). Grammar types: singular and plural issue (1), incorrect use of articles (17), incorrect use of verbs/word choice (26).

× Well, I already tell this, I don't like science because I have bad score on it. But I think the interesting things that I have done recently is about genu Gen. about Gen. of all the plants.

✓ Well, I already said this: I don't like science because I get bad scores in it. But I think the interesting thing I have done recently is studying the genes of plants.

Errors: wrong verb tense/choice ('tell'->'said'), singular/plural ('bad score'->'bad scores'), incorrect preposition ('on it'->'in it'), awkward phrasing 'interesting things... is' -> agreement and clarity ('thing... is' or 'things... are'), unclear term 'genu Gen.' likely 'genes'. Suggestion: Use correct past participle for 'say' ('said'), match subject and verb in number, use appropriate prepositions, and clarify technical terms. Grammar types: sentence structure errors (26), singular and plural issue (1), incorrect use of prepositions (11).

× I don't like to watching science TV programs. I always watch the psychology TV programs instead of science.

✓ I don't like watching science TV programs. I always watch psychology programs instead of science programs.

Errors: wrong verb pattern after 'like' ('to watching' -> 'watching' or 'to watch'), article/word choice ('the psychology TV programs' -> 'psychology programs'), repetition and parallelism ('instead of science' -> 'instead of science programs'). Suggestion: Use gerund after 'like' or use 'to' with base verb consistently; make parallel noun phrases. Grammar types: verb + -ing form (8), incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs/article errors (13/22).

× Well, to be honest, I am a Vietnamese, that's why I don't know about Chinese people. But in Vietnam have many parents and family. They bring their children into the to visit the science museums in their holiday.

✓ Well, to be honest, I am Vietnamese, so I don't know much about Chinese people. But in Vietnam many parents and families take their children to visit science museums on holidays.

Errors: article with nationality ('a Vietnamese' -> 'Vietnamese' or 'a Vietnamese person'), conjunction ('that's why'->'so'), sentence structure missing subject ('in Vietnam have many' -> 'in Vietnam many...'), plural forms ('family'->'families'), wrong preposition ('bring... into the to visit' -> 'take... to visit'), article with 'science museums' and time expression ('in their holiday' -> 'on holidays'). Suggestion: Use correct noun forms for nationalities, ensure sentences have subjects, use correct prepositions for movement ('take... to'), and use plural/time expressions appropriately. Grammar types: incorrect use of pronouns/adjectives (12/13), incorrect use of prepositions (11), article errors (22), sentence structure errors (26)}]} </ReportGrammarArguments>