Sharing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, avoid repetition and grammatical errors, and provide one specific example of how they taught you to share. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep responses concise (max 3–4 sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes — my parents taught me to share from an early age. For example, they made me take turns and lend toys to my siblings so I learned empathy and patience. Because of this, I grew up more comfortable cooperating with others.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct statement about what you share, reduce filler words (uh, umm), and give one or two specific examples with brief explanations. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'such as' to organize the answer.

Ví dụ: I usually share positive experiences and advice with others. For example, I tell friends about my achievements and the steps I took to reach them, and I offer practical tips when they face similar challenges.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (use passive/active forms properly), and give a specific reason or short example why such things shouldn't be shared. Avoid vague phrases and finish with a linking phrase or consequence.

Ví dụ: I think personal matters and secrets are not suitable for sharing. For example, I would not share financial details or private messages because they could be misused and harm trust.

Gợi ý: Provide a full, coherent response: state what you shared, give one or two specific details about the trip, and explain briefly why you shared it. Avoid incomplete sentences and trailing words.

Ví dụ: Yes — I recently shared photos and stories from my trip to Turkey with my friends. I described visiting Istanbul’s Grand Bazaar and trying local food, because they were planning a trip and wanted recommendations.

Gợi ý: Give a concise topic sentence naming the person, correct grammar (subject-verb agreement), and add one specific reason or example of how they react. Keep it to 2–3 sentences for clarity.

Ví dụ: The first person I would share good news with is my mother because she is very supportive. For instance, she always celebrates my achievements and offers helpful advice when I need it.

Gợi ý: Answer directly using a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers, and provide one or two specific categories of news with brief examples. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'such as' to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: With my friends I share many kinds of news, such as personal updates and challenges. For example, we discuss travel plans, relationship issues, and any good news like job offers so we can support each other.

× Yes, they used to make sure to show everything with them because it was one of their main priority, because without sharing they couldn't know what could happen to me or what's the difficult I go through.

✓ Yes, they used to make sure to show everything to me because it was one of their main priorities, because without sharing they couldn't know what could happen to me or what difficulties I went through.

Errors: incorrect preposition ('with' should be 'to'); singular/plural noun ('priority' should be plural 'priorities'); wrong relative clause and tense ('what's the difficult I go through' is ungrammatical). Suggestion: use 'show ... to me' for showing something to a person; use plural when referring to one of several priorities; replace informal clause with 'what difficulties I went through' and match past tense with 'used to' and 'went through'.

× Well, it depends on the topic, but I'm always make sure to share uh, positive things.

✓ Well, it depends on the topic, but I always make sure to share positive things.

Error: incorrect verb form 'I'm always make' mixes auxiliary 'am' with base verb. Suggestion: use 'I always make sure' for present habitual actions; remove filler words and ums for clarity.

× For instance, achieving goals, umm, give advices, uh, share my journey and so on.

✓ For instance, achieving goals, giving advice, sharing my journey, and so on.

Errors: inconsistent verb forms and incorrect plural 'advices' (uncountable). Suggestion: keep parallel -ing forms after 'for instance' and use 'advice' (uncountable).

× Well, from my perspective, the personal things such as your private life or secrets should not share it with people because it can be a tool that effect.

✓ Well, from my perspective, personal things such as your private life or secrets should not be shared with people because they can be used to hurt you.

Errors: wrong verb structure ('should not share it' should be passive 'should not be shared'); incorrect pronoun/number agreement and vague 'effect'. Suggestion: use passive 'should not be shared', match plural 'they', and use clearer verb 'used to hurt you' or 'used against you'.

× Yes, I have. For instance, I shared my trip in Turkey with my friends. I showed them the places that I went to. And.

✓ Yes, I have. For instance, I shared my trip to Turkey with my friends. I showed them the places I went to.

Errors: awkward preposition 'in Turkey' (use 'trip to Turkey'), unnecessary 'that' in relative clause, and sentence fragment 'And.'. Suggestion: use 'trip to' for destination, omit unnecessary 'that', and avoid sentence fragments.

× Actually the first person that I really like to share or to share and make sure to not hide anything about him is my mother because she's supportive and she and always happy for me.

✓ Actually, the first person I really like to share with and not hide anything from is my mother because she's supportive and always happy for me.

Errors: incorrect pronoun placement 'about him' (wrong gender and preposition), redundant phrasing 'to share or to share', extra 'and' in 'she and always'. Suggestion: use 'share with' and 'not hide anything from' for correct prepositions, remove redundancy, and fix subject 'she is always'.

× Honestly, we are used to share about everything such as our journey, the difficult that we go through, uh, good news.

✓ Honestly, we are used to sharing everything, such as our journeys, the difficulties we go through, and good news.

Errors: incorrect verb pattern 'used to share' (meaning 'accustomed to' requires -ing), incorrect preposition 'share about', singular 'journey' and 'difficult' wrong form. Suggestion: use 'used to sharing', pluralize countable nouns where appropriate, and use 'difficulties' for problems.