Number— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant but has minor issues: a couple of small grammar errors, slight redundancy, and could use one linking phrase to improve coherence. Also trim to fewer sentences and correct small word choices (e.g., “long digits” → “long numbers”). Add a brief example or method to show how you handle numbers to enrich content.

Ví dụ: Yes, generally I am. For example, I can easily remember short familiar numbers such as my phone number or PIN because I use them every day. However, I struggle with long numbers, so I usually write them down to avoid mistakes.

Gợi ý: Good structure and contrast between quantitative and qualitative tasks. Improve by using consistent tense (use future for future work) and a linking word to connect ideas. Provide a specific example of a task where you would use numbers in the future to make the answer more concrete.

Ví dụ: It depends on the project. In future roles involving budgeting or financial analysis, I will use many numbers and perform analytical calculations; however, for qualitative tasks like strategy development, I will rely more on judgment and discussion.

Gợi ý: The answer communicates reasons but contains several grammar and vocabulary errors and awkward phrasing (e.g., “mad concept,” “start avoid”). Also it’s slightly long and could be clearer with linking words. Correct the mistakes, use past tense consistently, and provide one brief specific example of a difficulty to strengthen the response.

Ví dụ: No, I did not enjoy math as a child because my teacher was not very supportive and I often struggled to understand concepts. As a result, I lost confidence and started to avoid the subject, especially when tests required problem solving.

Gợi ý: Message is clear but there are noticeable errors and a typo (“dead” instead of “day”). The answer is short—add a linking phrase and a specific detail about how you celebrate or why the date matters emotionally. Correct the typo and use precise vocabulary to improve naturalness.

Ví dụ: Birthdays are the most important numbers to me because they mark the day I was born. Every year my family and I celebrate with a small dinner and gifts, which makes the day feel special and reminds me to be grateful.

× I often struggled to mad concept.

✓ I often struggled to grasp the concept.

The original sentence uses 'mad' which is incorrect and likely a typo for a verb. The correct expression is 'struggled to grasp the concept.' 'Grasp' is the verb that fits 'struggled to + base verb' construction. Use the base form after 'struggled to.'

× As a result, I lost confidence and start avoid the subject whenever possible.

✓ As a result, I lost confidence and started to avoid the subject whenever possible.

The sentence mixes past tense ('lost') with present tense forms ('start avoid'). Since the context is past ('I did not enjoy studying math as a child'), both verbs should be in the past: 'started' (past of 'start') and 'to avoid' or 'avoided.' Also include the infinitive marker 'to' after 'started' when followed by a verb in this structure.

× Every year I celebrate with my family, which makes the dead feel special and remind me to be grateful.

✓ Every year I celebrate with my family, which makes the day feel special and reminds me to be grateful.

The original uses 'dead' which is a typo for 'day.' Also there is a subject-verb agreement issue: 'which' refers to 'celebrating' or 'the day' and requires 'reminds' to agree with the singular subject. So correct to 'day' and 'reminds.'