Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

I do have a bike when I was a child, but uh, we share it with my sister and that limit my use because it's just for sharing and uh, a few years it worn out and we didn't even have to use it anymore.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I do. I think bikes are very popular in our country. It's because it's when you have a bike, you don't need to buy gas, and gas is a very. Hard to find these days, especially if there's a war in a country and we just have stocks from them.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then add one or two relevant details. Use the past tense consistently: say “I had,” “we shared,” and “it wore out.” The phrase “that limit my use” is unnatural; explain simply that sharing the bike meant you could not use it whenever you wanted.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I shared it with my sister. So, I couldn’t always ride it whenever I wanted. After a few years, it wore out and we stopped using it.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear answer and explain the reason with a natural sentence structure. Avoid repeating “I think bikes are very popular,” and replace “gas is a very hard to find” with “gas is hard to find.” The final point about war and fuel supplies is unclear, so explain how this affects people in your country or use a simpler supporting detail.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. They’re a convenient way to get around, and people don’t have to spend money on fuel. They can also be useful when fuel is difficult to find.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× I do have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past period, and when I was a child makes the past time clear. Use the past-tense form had, not the present-tense form do have.

5: Past tense issue

× We share it with my sister.

✓ We shared it with my sister.

This describes what happened when you were a child, so use the past-tense verb shared. Keep the verb tense consistent with the past context.

5: Past tense issue

× That limit my use.

✓ That limited my use.

The sentence describes a past situation. Use limited, the past-tense form of limit.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× A few years it worn out.

✓ After a few years, it wore out.

Use after before a period of time to show when something happened. For example, say after a few years rather than a few years in this sentence.

5: Past tense issue

× A few years it worn out.

✓ After a few years, it wore out.

The bike wore out in the past. Use wore, the past-tense form of wear. Worn is a past participle and normally needs an auxiliary verb, as in had worn out.

26: Sentence structure errors

× It's because it's when you have a bike, you don't need to buy gas.

✓ It's because when you have a bike, you don't need to buy gas.

The extra it's makes the sentence structure incomplete and awkward. Use because when to introduce the reason directly, without repeating it's.

22: Article errors

× Gas is a very hard to find these days.

✓ Gas is very hard to find these days.

Do not use the article a before very hard. Here, very hard is an adjective phrase describing gas, so say gas is very hard to find.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Hard— Firm; Arduous; Difficult; Harsh; Strict
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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