Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer the question clearly at the beginning: say whether you had a bike. Use the correct past-tense structure, such as “when I was a child,” and avoid repeating the same point. The words “pie,” “bias,” and “white” make your meaning unclear; use “bike” consistently and explain why you wanted one. Add one specific detail about how you felt or what you would have done with a bike.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. I used to feel a little envious when I saw my friends riding their bikes. I would have loved to have one so I could ride around with them.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and make the distinction between bicycles and motorbikes clear. Use “motorbikes are more common” and “convenient,” rather than “motorbike is most common” and “convenience.” Explain your reason in a complete sentence, and finish without adding an unclear phrase. A brief comparison with city travel or commuting would make your answer more specific.

Ví dụ: Bicycles aren’t very popular in my country because many people prefer motorbikes. They’re convenient for commuting, especially when people need to travel a long distance or are in a hurry. However, some people still cycle for exercise or short trips.

× My family was poor when I a child, so that's why I didn't have a pie, uh, when I were child.

✓ My family was poor when I was a child, so that's why I didn't have a pie when I was a child.

The clause 'when I a child' is missing the verb 'was.' A complete clause needs a subject and a verb, so say 'when I was a child.'

× My family was poor when I a child, so that's why I didn't have a pie, uh, when I were child.

✓ My family was poor when I was a child, so that's why I didn't have a pie when I was a child.

The speaker is describing the past. With the subject 'I,' the past form of 'be' is 'was,' not 'were.'

× My family was poor when I a child, so that's why I didn't have a pie, uh, when I were child.

✓ My family was poor when I was a child, so that's why I didn't have a pie when I was a child.

The singular count noun 'child' needs an article. Use 'a child.'

× I'm really, really like to have, uh, white.

✓ I would really like to have a white bike.

The original combines 'I'm' with 'like to have' in an incorrect structure. To express a present wish, say 'I would like to have...' or 'I'd like to have...'. A complete object is also needed after 'a white.'

× For me, uh buys are not popular in my country because uh motorbike is most common umm motorbike is uh convenience, so you don't need to do exercise umm and give energy to ride a bike and you.

✓ For me, bikes are not popular in my country because motorbikes are the most common. Motorbikes are convenient, so you don't need to exercise or use energy to ride a bike.

When referring to bikes and motorbikes in general, use the plural forms 'bikes' and 'motorbikes.' A singular count noun would need an article, such as 'a motorbike.'

× For me, uh buys are not popular in my country because uh motorbike is most common umm motorbike is uh convenience, so you don't need to do exercise umm and give energy to ride a bike and you.

✓ For me, bikes are not popular in my country because motorbikes are the most common. Motorbikes are convenient, so you don't need to exercise or use energy to ride a bike.

'Convenience' is a noun, but this sentence needs an adjective after 'are.' Use 'convenient': 'Motorbikes are convenient.'

× For me, uh buys are not popular in my country because uh motorbike is most common umm motorbike is uh convenience, so you don't need to do exercise umm and give energy to ride a bike and you.

✓ For me, bikes are not popular in my country because motorbikes are the most common. Motorbikes are convenient, so you don't need to exercise or use energy to ride a bike.

Use 'the' before a superlative adjective such as 'most common': 'the most common.'