Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I still remember the afternoon I received my first bike. It's a sunny afternoon and I was so excited and I couldn't wait to try the bike. So my parents take me, took me to a park and.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think it's so popular that I can solve bikes. Saw bikes on the street every day. I think it's because bike is far faster than walking and it's cleaning. Don't that don't take any electric so everyone is willing to ride a bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,再用一两个具体细节补充回忆。注意讲过去的经历时统一使用过去时,例如将 “It’s” 改为 “It was”,将 “take me” 改为 “took me”。避免重复使用 and,并补全结尾,不要让句子停在未完成的地方。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I was thrilled to try it out. My parents took me to a nearby park, where they helped me learn how to ride.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 32.0Gợi ý: 回答中有相关观点,但部分表达难以理解。用清晰的词组说明自行车很常见,例如 “bikes are popular” 或 “I see people riding bikes every day”。注意主谓一致和名词单复数(“bikes are”“bicycles are”);表达原因时可用 “because”,并说明自行车速度快、环保或不需要燃油。用完整句子表达,避免重复和不完整的句子。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I see people riding them every day, especially in busy cities. They’re a convenient way to get around because they’re faster than walking and don’t produce exhaust fumes.
× It's a sunny afternoon
✓ It was a sunny afternoon.
这段话讲的是童年时发生的事情,因此应使用过去时。这里的 be 动词应从 is 改为 was,与过去的时间背景保持一致。
× Yes, I think it's so popular that I can solve bikes.
✓ Yes, I think they are very popular. I see bikes on the street every day.
这里谈论的是复数名词 bikes,因此应使用复数代词 they,而不是 it。原句中的 solve 用词不当,但这属于词汇选择问题,不在指定的语法错误类型范围内;此处仅将其调整为语法正确的表达。
× Saw bikes on the street every day.
✓ I see bikes on the street every day.
该句缺少主语,单独使用 Saw 不能构成完整的陈述句。描述日常、普遍的情况时,应补上主语 I,并使用一般现在时 see。
× I think it's because bike is far faster than walking
✓ I think it's because riding a bike is much faster than walking.
原句把 bike(交通工具)和 walking(步行这一行为)直接比较,比较对象不一致。应改为比较 riding a bike 和 walking,二者都是行为。
× and it's cleaning.
✓ and it's clean.
此处用 be 动词描述自行车或骑行的特征,应使用形容词 clean。cleaning 通常表示“正在打扫”,不适合表达“干净、环保”这一特征。
× Don't that don't take any electric so everyone is willing to ride a bike.
✓ They don't use any electricity, so everyone is willing to ride a bike.
原句开头的 Don't that don't 结构不完整,无法清楚表达主语和谓语之间的关系。应使用完整主语 They,并用 so 连接原因和结果。
× So my parents take me, took me to a park and.
✓ So my parents took me to a park.
这句话描述过去发生的事情,应使用过去式 took。原句中的 take me 是说话时的重复或自我修正,应删去;句末多余的 and 也应删除,避免句子悬空。