Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Absolutely. When I turn 6 my parents bought me a bicycle and that is when I learn to ride. I practice in the park near our house and my older brother had me until I felt confident.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Well, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and good for short trips in the city. For example, many students and office workers ride bikes to school or the train station so you can see a lot of them in busy areas.

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Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: You answer directly and give relevant details, but correct the past-tense verbs: use “turned,” “learned,” and “practised.” The phrase “my older brother had me” is unclear; say that he “helped me” or “taught me.”

Ví dụ: Absolutely. When I turned six, my parents bought me a bicycle, and that was when I learned to ride. I practised in the park near our house, and my older brother helped me until I felt confident.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear, relevant, and supported with a useful example. To make it more precise, replace “a lot of them” with “many cyclists” or “lots of bicycles,” and add a comma before “so.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re affordable and convenient for short trips around the city. For example, many students and office workers cycle to school or to the train station, so you often see lots of bicycles in busy areas.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× When I turn 6 my parents bought me a bicycle and that is when I learn to ride.

✓ When I turned six, my parents bought me a bicycle, and that was when I learned to ride.

The sentence describes events that happened in childhood, so the verbs should be in the past tense. Use turned, was, and learned rather than turn, is, and learn.

5: Past tense issue

× I practice in the park near our house and my older brother had me until I felt confident.

✓ I practiced in the park near our house, and my older brother had me until I felt confident.

Practiced should be in the past tense because it describes a childhood activity. Had is already in the past tense, so it is not changed here.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Busy— Occupied; Unavailable; Hectic
Cheap— Inexpensive; Poor-quality; Miserly; Despicable; Ashamed
Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Short— Concise; Brief; Scarce; Briefly
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