Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, not really. I didn't use Spike to travel to where I want. Uh, as a child I always take bus to go to school or go to the supermall with my friend, so I didn't really use bicycles.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

ES positive uh, in my country we have uh, we have bikes everywhere. You can scan the QR code on the bike to unlock the, uh, bicycle.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,再用一到两个具体细节解释。注意时态一致:讲童年经历时用一般过去时,例如“took the bus”;表达“去想去的地方”可说“go where I wanted”。“Spike”可能是语音识别错误,建议确认是否想说“a bike”。避免重复提到自己不骑自行车。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I usually took the bus to school, and sometimes I went to the mall with my friends, so I didn’t really need one.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 开头要清楚、直接地回答“Yes, they are”或“Yes, I think so”,避免不明确的“ES positive”和过多填充词。之后用共享单车作为具体例子,并说明扫码解锁的方式。注意表达简洁,避免重复“bike/bicycle”。

Ví dụ: Yes, they’re very popular in my country, especially in cities. There are shared bikes all over the streets, and people can scan a QR code to unlock one and ride it wherever they need to go.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× I didn't use Spike to travel to where I want.

✓ I didn't use Spike to travel to where I wanted.

这句话描述的是童年时期的情况,整体使用过去时。这里的 want 应改为 wanted,与过去的语境保持一致。

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× As a child I always take bus to go to school or go to the supermall with my friend, so I didn't really use bicycles.

✓ As a child, I always took the bus to go to school or go to the supermall with my friend, so I didn't really use bicycles.

句子描述的是小时候经常发生的事情,因此一般现在时 take 应改为一般过去时 took。

22: Article errors(冠词错误)

× As a child I always take bus to go to school or go to the supermall with my friend, so I didn't really use bicycles.

✓ As a child, I always took the bus to go to school or go to the supermall with my friend, so I didn't really use bicycles.

bus 是可数名词单数,不能单独使用;常见表达是 take the bus(乘公交车),因此需要在 bus 前加定冠词 the。

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