Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did. My father sent it to me when I was about five years old. I very liked it and I even drove it every evening in my neighbors or in the park nearby my home. I very enjoy it
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do. Back is very popular in my country. And even everyone has a back. We always ride ride our back in in our neighbors and in some parks. It can help us to make good friends, and it also can help us keep healthy.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 回答直接,但有明显的语法和搭配问题:应说“really liked”,而不是“very liked”;骑自行车用“rode”,不用“drove”;“in my neighbors”应根据意思改为“around my neighborhood”。注意时态一致,讲童年经历时用过去时,例如“I really enjoyed it”。可以补充一个具体细节,让回答更生动;最后避免重复表达喜欢。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My father gave me a bike when I was about five, and I really loved it. I rode it around my neighborhood or in a nearby park almost every evening. It was one of my favorite things to do as a child.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 38.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,并注意“bike”的拼写和发音;“Back”以及“back”应为“bike”。避免重复“ride”和“in”,并将“everyone has a bike”改为更自然的“many people own a bike”。可以按“普及程度—原因—具体场景”的顺序组织内容。搭配方面,可说“ride around the neighborhood”和“stay healthy”;若提到交朋友,最好说明骑车如何带来社交机会。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them around their neighborhoods or in parks, especially for exercise. Cycling is an affordable way to get around, and people can also meet others on group rides. It’s a convenient way to stay healthy.
× I very liked it and I even drove it every evening in my neighbors or in the park nearby my home.
✓ I liked it very much, and I even drove it every evening in my neighbors or in the park nearby my home.
“Very”通常不能直接修饰动词“liked”。要表达“非常喜欢”,可以把“very much”放在动词和宾语之后,例如“liked it very much”。
× I very liked it and I even drove it every evening in my neighbors or in the park nearby my home.
✓ I very liked it, and I even drove it every evening around my neighborhood or in the park near my home.
“在附近骑车”通常说“around my neighborhood”,而不是“in my neighbors”;“nearby”一般不直接放在名词前作介词,应改为“near my home”。
× I very enjoy it
✓ I enjoyed it very much.
学生在回答童年经历,语境是过去,因此应使用过去式“enjoyed”,而不是现在时“enjoy”。
× I very enjoy it
✓ I enjoyed it very much.
“Very”不能直接修饰动词“enjoy”。表达“非常喜欢”时,可以说“enjoyed it very much”,把“very much”放在宾语之后。
× We always ride ride our back in in our neighbors and in some parks.
✓ We always ride our bikes around our neighborhood and in some parks.
表示在社区范围内骑车,通常用“around our neighborhood”,不能说“in our neighbors”。“In”后面应接表示地点的名词,例如“neighborhood”。