Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because. When I'm seeking work, I can see so many people ride bikes. And.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 5.0Gợi ý: 你只是重复了考官的问题,没有回答是否有自行车。请先直接回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”,再补充一条具体信息,例如自行车的颜色、何时骑车或和谁一起骑。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got a small blue bike when I was about seven, and I often rode it around the neighborhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 你表达了自行车很受欢迎,也尝试提供观察作为理由,但“because”后面的句子没有完成,结尾的“And”也造成回答中断。“When I'm seeking work”与想表达的观察场景不太自然;可以说“When I go out”或“When I’m out and about”。此外,“see so many people ride bikes”可改为“see so many people riding bikes”。请用完整句子说明你看到的情况,并在最多五句话内结束回答。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. When I’m out and about, I often see many people riding them, especially in busy city areas. They’re convenient for short trips and can help people avoid traffic.
× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because. When I'm seeking work, I can see so many people ride bikes. And.
✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because when I'm looking for work, I see so many people riding bikes.
“Because”引导原因从句,后面需要接完整的原因,不能单独结束句子。“And”通常用于连接句子或成分,单独成句会造成句子残缺。可以把原因补充完整,并删除句末单独出现的“And”。“I can see people ride bikes”在语法上成立;改为“see people riding bikes”是更自然的表达。