Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes I did, my mom bought a bike for me as my 13 years old birthday. Gift and I like it very much.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

And yes, I do. Many students ride bike to school. And I think bikes are really convenient.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,再补充一个具体细节。注意用“for my 13th birthday”表达“作为我13岁的生日礼物”,序数词应为“13th”,而不是“13 years old”;“gift”不应单独大写。可用“and”连接完整句子,或分成两句,并使用过去时保持时态一致。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My mom bought me a bike for my 13th birthday, and I really loved it. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答切题,也给出了学生骑车上学这一理由。开头不必用“And”,避免连续用“And”连接句子;“ride bike”应改为“ride bikes”或“ride a bike”。可以进一步说明自行车方便在哪里,让回答更具体。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many students ride their bikes to school because it’s an affordable and convenient way to get around, especially for short distances.

Ngữ pháp

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Yes I did, my mom bought a bike for me as my 13 years old birthday.

✓ Yes, I did. My mom bought me a bike for my 13th birthday.

表示“13岁生日”时,应使用序数词“13th”修饰“birthday”,不能说“13 years old birthday”。另外,“for my birthday”是表达“作为生日礼物”的自然用法。

26: Sentence structure errors

× Gift and I like it very much.

✓ It was a gift, and I liked it very much.

“Gift”单独放在句首无法构成完整、清楚的句子结构。可以补上主语和动词“It was”,并用“and”连接后面的想法。这里叙述童年时的经历,用过去式“liked”也更符合语境。

1: Singular and plural issue

× Many students ride bike to school.

✓ Many students ride bikes to school.

“bike”是可数名词,泛指许多学生骑自行车上学时,应使用复数“bikes”。也可以说“ride a bike”,但不能在这里单独使用单数“bike”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Old— Elderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
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