Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was very interesting to riding, ride a bike with my friends and parents. It has a lot of fun with that and now it has been so old to ride though it is my favorite bike. Yeah.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Not so popular in my country and definitely it was so popular in the past, but now it's not so popular as it used to. In my opinion, the the more popular things this time is to ride a motorbike around the country.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答是否有自行车,再补充一两个具体细节。注意使用正确的动词形式:说“骑车很有趣”可以用“it was fun to ride”,不能说“interesting to riding”;“我玩得很开心”应说“I had a lot of fun”。描述童年经历时保持过去时,并把自行车现在的状况说清楚,例如它很旧,但仍是你最喜欢的车。避免结尾单独加“Yeah”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I loved riding it with my friends and parents because it was a lot of fun. It’s quite old now, but it’s still my favorite bike.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 开头要明确回答现在自行车是否流行,并避免与后文“过去很流行”造成表达混乱。可用“used to be more popular”表示过去比现在流行。说明原因或进行对比时,用一个具体细节支持观点;例如提到人们现在更常骑摩托车通勤。注意说“these days”,而不是“this time”,并避免重复冠词“the”。
Ví dụ: Bikes are less popular in my country than they used to be. These days, many people prefer motorbikes because they’re faster and more convenient for commuting. However, some people still ride bicycles for exercise or short trips.
× It was very interesting to riding, ride a bike with my friends and parents.
✓ It was very interesting to ride a bike with my friends and parents.
“interesting”后面可以接“to + 动词原形”,所以这里应使用“to ride”,不能说“to riding”。说这类句子时,可以记住“形容词 + to + 动词原形”的结构。
× It has a lot of fun with that and now it has been so old to ride though it is my favorite bike.
✓ I had a lot of fun with it, and now it is too old to ride, although it is my favorite bike.
前半句是在讲小时候的经历,应使用一般过去时“had”,而不是现在时“has”。谈论过去发生的事情时,要注意将动词改为过去式。
× It has a lot of fun with that and now it has been so old to ride though it is my favorite bike.
✓ I had a lot of fun with it, and now it is too old to ride, although it is my favorite bike.
这里是说“我”玩得很开心,因此主语应使用“I”,而不是指代自行车的“It”。后面的“that”指前文提到的自行车,用“it”指代更合适。选择代词时要确认它指的是人还是物,以及它在句子中所指的对象。
× It has a lot of fun with that and now it has been so old to ride though it is my favorite bike.
✓ I had a lot of fun with it, and now it is too old to ride, although it is my favorite bike.
自行车现在很旧,是目前的状态,因此应使用一般现在时“is”,不应使用“has been”。描述现在存在的状态时,通常用“主语 + be动词 + 形容词”。
× It has a lot of fun with that and now it has been so old to ride though it is my favorite bike.
✓ I had a lot of fun with it, and now it is too old to ride, although it is my favorite bike.
要表达“太旧了,不能骑”,应使用“too + 形容词 + to do”,所以应说“too old to ride”,而不是“so old to ride”。注意“too...to...”表示“太……而不能……”。
× Not so popular in my country and definitely it was so popular in the past, but now it's not so popular as it used to.
✓ Bikes are not very popular in my country. They were definitely more popular in the past, but now they are not as popular as they used to be.
原句开头“Not so popular in my country”缺少主语和谓语,应补上“Bikes are”。句末“as they used to”后缺少be动词;这里的完整表达是“as popular as they used to be”。检查句子时,要确保每个完整分句都有必要的主语和谓语。
× In my opinion, the the more popular things this time is to ride a motorbike around the country.
✓ In my opinion, riding a motorbike around the country is more popular nowadays.
原句中“the”重复出现了一次,应删除多余的定冠词。使用冠词时,注意同一个名词短语前不要重复使用“the”。
× In my opinion, the the more popular things this time is to ride a motorbike around the country.
✓ In my opinion, riding a motorbike around the country is more popular nowadays.
原句中的主语“things”是复数,但后面使用了单数动词“is”,主谓不一致。改写为“riding a motorbike around the country”后,动名词短语作单数主语,因此搭配“is”。