Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I was a child, um enjoy riding back.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, in China many children have a back because when they was a child, mm, they liked writing it.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答方向正确,但句子缺少主语“I”,而且“when I was a child”后应使用过去时。请清楚说出“bike”,并补充一个具体细节,例如骑车的地点或感受。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood, especially at weekends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答自行车是否流行,再给出具体原因或例子。注意主谓一致:“they were”,而不是“they was”;“ride a bike”表示“骑自行车”,不是“write a bike”。此外,“因为他们小时候喜欢骑”与“很多孩子拥有自行车”之间的逻辑关系不够清楚,可改为说明自行车方便、经济或适合短途出行。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially among children and people who live in smaller cities. They’re affordable and convenient for short trips, and many people also enjoy cycling for exercise.
× Yes, when I was a child, um enjoy riding back.
✓ Yes, when I was a child, I enjoyed riding a bike.
这里是在回忆童年,应用过去时。原句中的 enjoy 应改为 enjoyed。回答中还缺少主语 I;另外,结合语境将 back 理解为 bike,并在单数可数名词 bike 前加 a。
× Yes, when I was a child, um enjoy riding back.
✓ Yes, when I was a child, I enjoyed riding a bike.
原句在 enjoy 前缺少主语,导致句子结构不完整。可补上 I,组成完整的主谓结构:I enjoyed。
× Yes, in China many children have a back because when they was a child, mm, they liked writing it.
✓ Yes, in China, many children have a bike. When they were children, they liked riding them.
主语 they 是复数,be 动词应使用 were,而不是 was。改为 they were children 后,主谓一致,也使复数主语与表语在数量上相符。结合上下文,将 back 和 writing 分别理解为 bike 和 riding。