Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I have a bike, but not like the one which my parents write. Just like a small bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yeah, it is. There are lots of varieties of bike, just like examples, Splendor, Pulsar, many more. Yeah. And basically one of the most and my favorite one bike is Crossfire because it is just like, wow, I can't explain it. It is undefined.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Answer in the past tense because the question asks about your childhood: use “had,” not “have.” The phrase “the one which my parents write” is unclear; explain what kind of bike your parents had or rode. Add one specific detail about your bike, such as its color or where you rode it.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a small bike when I was a child. It was much smaller than the bikes my parents rode, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and use the plural form: “Yes, they are.” Clarify whether you mean bicycles or motorbikes, since your examples are motorbike models. Replace vague phrases such as “I can’t explain it” and “undefined” with a specific reason, and avoid repeating “yeah.” Support your answer with one clear detail about who uses them or why they are popular.

Ví dụ: Yes, motorbikes are very popular in my country. Many people use models like the Splendor and Pulsar because they are convenient for commuting. My favorite is the Crossfire because I like its sporty design.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× Yeah, I have a bike, but not like the one which my parents write.

✓ Yeah, I had a bike, but not like the one my parents rode.

The question asks about the student’s childhood, so use the past tense had instead of have. If the intended verb is ride, its past-tense form is rode, not write.

23: Sentence without a verb

× Just like a small bike.

✓ It was just a small bike.

This is a sentence fragment because it has no main verb. Adding was makes it a complete sentence.

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yeah, it is.

✓ Yeah, they are.

The question refers to bikes, which is plural. Use the plural pronoun they and the matching verb are, rather than it is.

1: Singular and plural issue

× There are lots of varieties of bike, just like examples, Splendor, Pulsar, many more.

✓ There are lots of varieties of bikes, such as the Splendor, the Pulsar, and many more.

Because the sentence refers to many varieties, bike should be plural: bikes. Use such as to introduce examples clearly.

26: Sentence structure errors

× And basically one of the most and my favorite one bike is Crossfire because it is just like, wow, I can't explain it.

✓ And basically, my favorite bike is the Crossfire because it is just like, wow, I can't explain it.

The phrase one of the most is incomplete, and one bike is awkwardly placed in the sentence. Use a clear subject, my favorite bike, followed by the verb is.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Small— Little; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
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