Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a bike that can assist me to learn how to ride.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yeah, definitely. Uh, because most people ride bikes to work and we have mmm shared bikes everywhere in China.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答切题,但第二句表达不自然且有重复。可以直接说明这辆自行车如何帮助你学会骑车;注意使用过去时,例如将“can assist me to learn”改为“helped me learn”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It had training wheels, which helped me learn how to ride safely.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 观点明确,也给出了共享单车这一具体理由。不过,“Uh”和“mmm”会影响流畅度,而且“most people”可能过于绝对。建议去掉填充词,并用更准确的表达补充自行车受欢迎的原因或使用场景。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in China, especially in big cities. Many people use shared bikes for short trips or to get to the nearest subway station.

Ngữ pháp

4: Modal verb usage(情态动词使用错误)

× It was a bike that can assist me to learn how to ride.

✓ It was a bike that could help me learn how to ride.

句子描述的是过去的经历(“It was a bike”),因此表示过去能力或可能性的情态动词应使用 could,而不是 can。建议根据句子的时间背景调整情态动词的时态。

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