Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a bike when I was uh uh 40 because I f- uh succeed, uh, come in the high school. Uh, the bike is my mother bike for me.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
No
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 你直接回答了问题,但时态和表达不够准确,原因也不清楚。讲过去的经历时使用一般过去时,例如“had”“got”;“my mother bike for me”可改为“my mother bought it for me”。建议补充清楚年龄或时间,以及骑车的用途。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I started high school. My mother bought it for me, and I used it to ride around my neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: “No”虽然回答了问题,但内容太短,没有解释原因。建议先直接表达观点,再补充一两个具体理由,例如当地人的出行习惯、公共交通或道路条件。
Ví dụ: Not particularly. Many people prefer to travel by car or public transport, especially in big cities. However, bikes are still popular for short trips and exercise.
× Yes, I have a bike when I was uh uh 40 because I f- uh succeed, uh, come in the high school.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was, uh, 40 because I, uh, got into high school.
这里说的是童年时发生的事情,应用一般过去时。have 应改为 had,succeed 应改为 succeeded;结合“进入高中”的意思,可用 got into。练习时可以先判断事件发生的时间,再确保相关动词都使用相应的时态。
× Yes, I have a bike when I was uh uh 40 because I f- uh succeed, uh, come in the high school.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was, uh, 40 because I, uh, got into high school.
表示“进入高中”时,常用 get into high school,而不是 come in the high school。注意介词或介词短语要根据具体含义搭配;这里 got into 也符合句子的过去时间。
× Uh, the bike is my mother bike for me.
✓ Uh, the bike was for me, and it belonged to my mother.
这句话描述的是小时候的自行车,应使用过去时:is 改为 was。belonged 也使用过去时,说明自行车当时属于母亲。回答过去发生的事情时,要注意句中的动词保持过去时。