Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

I have a bike when I was a child and it was a bike. It is color blue and it's my father body for me.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I don't think bikes are popular in my country because most of them use cars or motorbikes for the others transportation and lack of people use bikes because there are less of bikes routes for the bikes to

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly using the past tense: “I had a bike.” Avoid repeating “bike,” and use “blue” rather than “color blue.” The final phrase is unclear; if you mean your father bought it for you, say so. Add one relevant detail, such as how often you rode it.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a blue bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion first, then explain it with one or two reasons. Replace “most of them” with “most people,” and use “other forms of transportation” and “there are fewer bike lanes.” Your answer is unfinished, so complete the final idea and avoid repeating “bikes.”

Ví dụ: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country. Most people use cars or motorbikes because they are more convenient, and there aren’t many bike lanes in some areas.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence refers to a period in the past, so use the past-tense form had rather than the present-tense form have.

5: Past tense issue

× It is color blue.

✓ It was blue.

Because you are describing the bike when you were a child, use the past-tense verb was. Blue is an adjective that describes the bike; color is unnecessary here.

26: Sentence structure errors

× It's my father body for me.

✓ My father bought it for me.

The original clause does not have a clear grammatical structure, and body does not fit the intended meaning. If you mean that your father purchased the bike for you, use the past-tense sentence My father bought it for me.

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× Most of them use cars or motorbikes for the others transportation.

✓ Most people use cars or motorbikes for their transportation.

The pronoun them is unclear and may appear to refer to bikes. Use people to identify who uses the vehicles. Others is a pronoun, but a determiner is needed before transportation; their is appropriate here.

14: Incorrect use of quantifiers

× Lack of people use bikes because there are less of bikes routes.

✓ Few people use bikes because there are fewer bike routes.

Use few to describe a small number of people. Bike routes are countable, so use fewer rather than less. Do not use of between fewer and bike routes.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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