Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, actually my family is very poor, so I didn't have a bite when I was a child.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I don't think so. Now the children S shouldn't have a by by themselves. When they'll go to school, the parent will.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 你直接回答了问题,也给出了原因,但有两处需要改进:第一,注意区分“bike”(自行车)和“bite”(咬一口);第二,讲过去的家庭情况时,用过去时“my family was very poor”更自然。可以补充一个具体细节,例如你通常如何上学或出行。
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family didn’t have much money. I usually walked to school or went with my parents.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 32.0Gợi ý: 目前的回答意思不够清楚,且后半句没有完整表达。请先明确回答自行车是否流行,再用一个具体原因支持观点。注意说“children”时不需要加“the”;表达孩子自己骑车可用“ride bikes on their own”;谈一般情况时用“when they go”而不是“when they’ll go”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and commuters. They’re an affordable and convenient way to get around, although many parents drive their children to school.
× No, actually my family is very poor, so I didn't have a bite when I was a child.
✓ No, actually my family was very poor, so I didn't have a bite when I was a child.
这里说的是“小时候”的情况,语境在过去,因此描述家庭当时的状况应使用过去式 was,而不是现在式 is。
× When they'll go to school, the parent will.
✓ When they go to school, the parent will.
在 when 引导的时间状语从句中,即使表达将来,也通常使用一般现在时,因此应说“When they go”,而不是“When they'll go”。
× When they'll go to school, the parent will.
✓ When they go to school, their parents will take them to school.
will 后面缺少主要动词,句子没有表达完整。需要补上动词来说明家长将做什么。此处补为“take them to school”是根据上下文作出的合理推测。