Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I don't have a bike when I was a child because I never learned to ride, so my parents don't didn't buy me a bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, China. Um, in China, there are some roads that only bikes can can go. And there's very very there are a lot of people ride bikes in the society in the society.

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Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,并统一使用过去时。你提到了不会骑车这一原因,可以保留,但要避免“don't didn't”这类自我重复;用“so”连接原因和结果即可。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because I never learned how to ride one. As a result, my parents didn’t think there was a reason to buy me one.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: 开头回答明确,但后面的表达有重复和语法错误。可以用“dedicated bike lanes”表达自行车专用道,并用“many people commute by bike”说明自行车的普及情况。删去“um”“very very”和重复的“in the society”,再用“because”或“for example”连接补充细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China. Many cities have dedicated bike lanes, so cycling is a convenient way to get around. For example, lots of people ride bikes to work or school, especially for short journeys.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child because I never learned to ride, so my parents don't didn't buy me a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I never learned to ride, so my parents didn't buy me a bike.

这句话描述的是童年时发生的事情,因此要使用一般过去时。将“don't have”改为“didn't have”;“don't didn't buy”是重复且时态混乱,应改为“didn't buy”。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× In China, there are some roads that only bikes can can go.

✓ In China, there are some roads that only bikes can go on.

表达“骑车走在道路上”时,动词“go”后需要介词“on”,所以应说“go on the roads”。同时删去重复的“can”。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× And there's very very there are a lot of people ride bikes in the society in the society.

✓ And there are a lot of people who ride bikes in the society.

“There are a lot of people”后不能直接接“ride bikes”作为修饰语;需要加关系代词“who”,构成“people who ride bikes”。另外,删去重复和未完成的口语片段,使句子结构完整。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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