Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Oh, I don't have a back when I was a child because I'm 36 this year than when I was a child, my family was very poor, so I didn't have a.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I think bags are very popular in our country because whatever child, student or adults, we all use bicycle when I am fun.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly in the past tense and correct the word “back” to “bike.” Avoid the unclear age comparison and finish your final sentence. Add one relevant detail explaining why you did not have a bike.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family was quite poor, so we couldn’t afford one. I sometimes borrowed a friend’s bike, though.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: Correct “bags” to “bikes” and use natural phrasing such as “children, students, and adults.” Explain how people use bikes, and replace the unclear phrase “when I am fun” with a specific purpose, such as commuting or recreation.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. People of all ages use them, especially to commute short distances or get some exercise. They’re also a convenient way to avoid traffic.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× Oh, I don't have a back when I was a child because I'm 36 this year than when I was a child, my family was very poor, so I didn't have a.

✓ Oh, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family was very poor.

The answer refers to the past, as shown by when I was a child, so use the past-tense form didn't have instead of don't have. Keep the reason in the past as well: my family was very poor. To describe a past situation, make sure the verbs in the sentence match the past-time reference.

26: Sentence structure errors

× Oh, I don't have a back when I was a child because I'm 36 this year than when I was a child, my family was very poor, so I didn't have a.

✓ Oh, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family was very poor.

The original sentence combines several ideas in an unclear, incomplete structure. The phrase I'm 36 this year than when I was a child does not form a grammatical comparison, and the sentence ends with a without the noun it needs. Use a clear clause to answer the question, and include the noun after an article, as in a bike.

1: Singular and plural issue

× I think bags are very popular in our country because whatever child, student or adults, we all use bicycle when I am fun.

✓ I think bikes are very popular in our country because children, students, and adults all use bicycles for fun.

The answer refers to people and bicycles in general, so plural forms are appropriate: children, students, and bicycles. Use a plural noun when talking about multiple people or things in a general statement.

16: Incorrect conjunction use

× I think bags are very popular in our country because whatever child, student or adults, we all use bicycle when I am fun.

✓ I think bikes are very popular in our country because children, students, and adults all use bicycles for fun.

Whatever does not correctly introduce the list of groups in this sentence. List the groups directly and connect them with and. When presenting alternatives, you could also say whether they are children, students, or adults.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× I think bags are very popular in our country because whatever child, student or adults, we all use bicycle when I am fun.

✓ I think bikes are very popular in our country because children, students, and adults all use bicycles for fun.

When explaining the purpose of using bicycles, say for fun rather than when I am fun. Use for before a noun or activity to express purpose, as in for fun.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Back— Rear; Reverse; Backward
Fun— Merriment; Ridicule; Enjoyable; Playful; Tease
Poor— Poverty-stricken; Substandard; Meager; Unproductive; Deficient in
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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