Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, when I was young I um b- had a bike when I was a child. Then I I tried to practice how to like the bike but my mom gave up to ta- teaching me because I cannot

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, in Korea there are lots of bike thefts. So many people have a lack in their bikeses. This means bikes are very popular in my country, in Korea.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 질문에 바로 답한 점은 좋지만, 같은 내용을 반복하고 말이 중간에 끊겨 답변이 완성되지 않았습니다. 과거 경험이므로 과거 시제를 일관되게 사용하고, “gave up teaching me”처럼 자연스러운 표현을 쓰세요. 자전거를 배울 때 어떤 어려움이 있었는지 한 가지 구체적인 내용을 덧붙이면 답변이 더 완성도 있어집니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I tried to learn how to ride it, but I found it difficult to keep my balance. After a while, my mom stopped teaching me, so I never became a confident cyclist.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: “자전거 도난이 많다”는 사실만으로 자전거가 인기 있다는 결론을 내리기는 논리적으로 어렵습니다. 인기를 설명할 때는 자전거 이용자가 많은 이유나 사용 목적을 제시하세요. “bikeses”는 “bikes”로, “have a lack in their bikes”는 의도에 맞는 표현으로 고쳐야 합니다. 예를 들어 출퇴근이나 운동에 자전거를 이용하는 사람이 많다고 말할 수 있습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in South Korea. Many people ride them for exercise or to enjoy the riverside paths, especially at weekends. However, I think they are less commonly used for commuting in busy city centres.

Ngữ pháp

8: Verb + -ing form

× Then I tried to practice how to like the bike, but my mom gave up to teaching me because I cannot.

✓ Then I tried to practice how to like the bike, but my mom gave up teaching me because I couldn't.

After give up, use a gerund (-ing form), not to + verb. Say gave up teaching. Because the story is about your childhood, use couldn't rather than cannot for the past.

5: Past tense issue

× Then I tried to practice how to like the bike, but my mom gave up to teaching me because I cannot.

✓ Then I tried to practice how to like the bike, but my mom gave up teaching me because I couldn't.

The sentence describes a past experience, so use the past form couldn't instead of the present form cannot. Keep the verb tense consistent when narrating past events.

1: Singular and plural issue

× So many people have a lack in their bikeses.

✓ So many people lack bikes.

The regular plural of bike is bikes, not bikeses. For practice, form most plurals by adding -s or -es only when the word's spelling requires it.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× So many people have a lack in their bikeses.

✓ So many people lack bikes.

Lack is normally used directly with the thing that is missing, as in lack bikes. Do not use in after lack in this meaning.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Young— Youthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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