Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father brought me one to help me learn how to ride, and I remember practicing with him in the park every weekend.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Certainly. Um when I was child, when I was child, I remember um people used to write bikes to the market to buy some groceries and nowadays people also use bikes.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 88.0Gợi ý: 回答直接且结构清晰,具体提到了父亲买自行车以及一起在公园练习,内容自然、有细节。可以把“brought me one”换成更准确的“bought me one”,并适当精简重复信息,让表达更口语、流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My father bought me my first bike so I could learn to ride. We used to practise together in the park every weekend, which was a lot of fun.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 回答有回应问题,也尝试通过过去和现在的情况来说明,但重复了“when I was child”,且有多处填充词,影响流畅度。注意说“when I was a child”,表达骑车应使用“ride bikes”而不是“write bikes”;同时补充一个具体的当代用途,例如通勤或锻炼,并用连接词衔接过去与现在。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. When I was a child, people often rode them to the market to buy groceries. These days, many people still cycle, especially for short commutes or exercise.
× Um when I was child, when I was child, I remember um people used to write bikes to the market to buy some groceries and nowadays people also use bikes.
✓ Um, when I was a child, when I was a child, I remember, um, people used to write bikes to the market to buy some groceries, and nowadays people also use bikes.
“child”是可数名词单数,前面需要加冠词。这里表示“我小时候”,应说“when I was a child”。原句中的“when I was child”重复出现,因此两处都需要补上不定冠词“a”。