Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 最初の「I heard I heard Bruver」は意味が伝わりにくいため、言いたい内容を明確にして答えましょう。まず「Yes, I did.」のように質問へ直接答え、その後、自転車の特徴や友達がうらやましがった理由を具体的に説明するとよいです。「proud of me」はこの文脈では不自然なので、「I felt proud」などに言い換えましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a bright red bike, and I was really proud of it. My friends often complimented it and sometimes said they wished they had one like it.

Gợi ý: 自転車が人気だという意見には答えられていますが、「交通が混雑しているため」という理由を、自然な表現で整理しましょう。「traffic is busy」ではなく「the roads are often congested」などが使えます。また、「one of us」は不要です。理由を述べたあと、自分も自転車で通勤・通学しているという具体例をつなげると、回答が明確になります。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in Japan, especially in busy cities. The roads and public transport can get crowded, so cycling is a convenient way to get around. I also commute by bike because it gives me more flexibility.

× That makes me so proud of me.

✓ That makes me so proud of myself.

When the object refers to the same person as the subject, use the reflexive pronoun myself rather than me. Here, me refers to the speaker, so the correct phrase is proud of myself.

× So there is a nice experience.

✓ So, it was a nice experience.

The student is describing an experience from childhood, so the past tense was is appropriate. It was is also the natural subject-and-verb construction for describing an experience.

× Yes, I think uh this because Japanese transportation is so busy to traffic busy traffic so but actually one of us one of the best transportation in Japan so yeah actually uh I commute with my bike

✓ Yes, I think so because traffic in Japan is very busy. But bikes are actually one of the best means of transportation in Japan, and I commute by bike.

The original answer contains an incomplete phrase, an unclear and disordered clause, and a missing subject and verb before one of the best transportation. Use think so to complete the first clause, and form a complete sentence with a subject and verb. The phrase one of us does not fit the intended meaning and has been omitted.

× One of the best transportation in Japan

✓ One of the best means of transportation in Japan

After one of the, use a plural countable noun. Transportation is generally uncountable, so means of transportation is a suitable plural phrase here.