Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Do you have a bite when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I think bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in Hong Kong, because it is a bus, busy city and many people feel stressed after work. Cycling is a common leisure activity for commuters and young people to relax and distress. For example, they often ride along in parks or along waterfront cycle paths at weekends.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 5.0

Gợi ý: 回答没有正面回应问题,而且把“bike”说成了“bite”,导致意思不清。先直接说明小时候有没有自行车,再补充一个简短细节,例如谁给你买的,或你通常在哪里骑。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small blue bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around our neighbourhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答观点明确,也提供了原因和例子,结构完整。注意减少口语重复或误说(“a bus, busy city”),并将“distress”改为“de-stress”或“unwind”;“ride along in parks”可改为“ride in parks”或“ride along park paths”。此外,香港自行车是否普及可以表达得更准确一些,例如说明它更常作为休闲活动,而非日常通勤方式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think cycling is fairly popular in Hong Kong, mainly as a leisure activity. Although the city is crowded, many people cycle to unwind after work or at weekends. For example, they ride along waterfront paths or around parks.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时问题)

× Do you have a bite when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bite when you were a child?

句子中的时间状语“when you were a child”指过去,因此询问过去是否拥有某物时,应使用一般过去时“Did you have”,而不是一般现在时“Do you have”。

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs(形容词或副词使用错误)

× I think bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in Hong Kong, because it is a bus, busy city.

✓ I think bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in Hong Kong, because it is a busy city.

这里需要用形容词“busy”修饰名词“city”。“bus”是名词,不能在此处修饰“city”;应删除它,改为“a busy city”(一个繁忙的城市)。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× For example, they often ride along in parks or along waterfront cycle paths at weekends.

✓ For example, they often ride in parks or along waterfront cycle paths at weekends.

“along”表示沿着某条路线移动,通常需要接道路、河岸等路线;“in parks”表示在公园里,因此此处不应把“along”与“in parks”连用。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Busy— Occupied; Unavailable; Hectic
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Young— Youthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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