Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I did. I had my back first my back when I was nine years old. You know I like uh, by uh, taking bike, uh, very much. I think it can improve my.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yeah, there are too many bikes in my country. Uh, many most of worker workers will um can ride their bike, uh, to go to work, you know
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,再补充一两个具体细节。注意“自行车”要说“a bike”,“骑自行车”要说“ride a bike”;“我九岁时有了第一辆自行车”可以说“I got my first bike when I was nine”。避免重复、填充词和未完成的句子,并把想表达的好处说完整,例如骑车能增强体质。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was nine, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood because it kept me active.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 直接说明自行车是否受欢迎;“too many”通常带有“数量过多”的负面含义,这里用“very popular”或“quite common”更合适。说明通勤情况时,可说“many workers ride their bikes to work”,注意“workers”用复数,并避免“will”和“can”同时使用。再补充一个具体原因或场景,让回答更完整。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many workers ride them to work, especially in cities where they are a convenient way to avoid traffic.
× You know I like uh, by uh, taking bike, uh, very much.
✓ I like riding bikes very much.
“like”后面可以直接接动名词,不需要加“by”;“by”通常表示“通过某种方式”,此处多余。建议说“I like riding…”来表达“我喜欢骑……”。
× You know I like uh, by uh, taking bike, uh, very much.
✓ I like riding bikes very much.
泛指喜欢骑自行车时,可用复数“bikes”;单数可数名词“bike”不能在此处单独使用。建议泛指时说“riding bikes”,或说“riding a bike”。
× I think it can improve my.
✓ I think it can improve my health.
“my”是物主限定词,后面必须接名词;原句在“my”后中断,意思不完整。建议在“my”后补充具体名词,例如“health”。
× Many most of worker workers will um can ride their bike, uh, to go to work.
✓ Most workers can ride their bikes to work.
“many”和“most of”不能像原句这样连用。泛指“多数工人”时,直接说“Most workers”;如果使用“most of”,则需要说“most of the workers”。
× Many most of worker workers will um can ride their bike, uh, to go to work.
✓ Most workers can ride their bikes to work.
“workers”指许多工人,应使用复数形式;“their”指这些工人各自的自行车,因此用“bikes”更符合复数泛指。建议注意名词的单复数与语境保持一致。
× Many most of worker workers will um can ride their bike, uh, to go to work.
✓ Most workers can ride their bikes to work.
“will”和“can”是两个情态动词,不能在此处连续使用。表达“能够骑车上班”时保留“can”即可;如果表达将来,则可用“will be able to”。