Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, actually I don't have a back when I was child because. Now I don't I don't know how to write a bag.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, bags is very popular in our in our country. You know our Coun. Our country have have a type of background. I mean, everyone shares the bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答是否有自行车,再用一两句补充原因或相关经历。注意使用过去时:谈童年时用“didn’t have”;“骑自行车”说“ride a bike”,不是“write a bike”。避免重复,并确保句子完整、表达清楚。
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I never learned how to ride one, so I usually walked or took the bus.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 开头直接说明自行车是否流行,并用具体信息解释原因,例如共享单车在城市中的普及情况。注意使用复数主语和正确的动词形式:“bikes are popular”“our country has”。避免重复,并用连接词让补充内容更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities. Many people use shared bikes for short trips because they’re convenient and affordable.
× No, actually I don't have a back when I was child because.
✓ No, actually, I didn't have a back when I was a child.
句子谈的是童年时期的情况,时间由“when I was”明确限定在过去,因此“don't have”应改为过去式“didn't have”。
× No, actually I don't have a back when I was child because.
✓ No, actually, I didn't have a back when I was a child.
“child”是可数名词单数,前面需要冠词。这里应说“a child”。
× No, actually I don't have a back when I was child because.
✓ No, actually, I didn't have a back when I was a child.
句末的“because”表示后面还应接一个原因从句,但句子没有提供原因,结构不完整。若不补充原因,应删去“because”。
× Yes, bags is very popular in our in our country.
✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country.
复数主语“bikes”应搭配复数动词“are”,不能搭配“is”。另外,问题谈的是自行车,因此这里应使用“bikes”;“in our in our”是重复表达,删去重复部分即可。
× Our country have have a type of background.
✓ Our country has a type of background.
“Our country”是第三人称单数主语,一般现在时中动词应使用第三人称单数形式“has”,而不是“have”。“have have”属于重复表达,保留一个动词即可。