Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a bike when I were a child, as my mom buy for me, bought for me.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, in my country, uh, the bike usually uh
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 你直接回答了问题,也提到了自行车是妈妈买的,但时态和主谓一致错误较多。谈论童年经历时应使用一般过去时,例如用“had”表达“有”,用“was”表达“是”,用“bought”表达“买”。尽量避免重复修改同一个词,并补充一个具体细节,让回答更完整。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mom bought it for me when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 15.0Gợi ý: 你表达了肯定态度,但回答没有完成,因此没有清楚说明自行车是否受欢迎,也缺少理由或例子。先直接回答问题,再补充一到两个具体原因,例如自行车方便、价格实惠,或适合短途通勤。注意减少“uh”等填充词,并使用完整句子。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips. They are affordable and convenient, and many people use them to commute or get around their neighborhoods.
× Yes, I have a bike when I were a child, as my mom buy for me, bought for me.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child because my mom bought it for me.
这句话描述的是童年发生的事情,应使用过去时。把“have”改为“had”,把“buy”改为“bought”。“bought for me”前需要补充宾语“it”。说话人已经自我修正了“buy for me”,整理时保留正确的“bought for me”即可。
× Yes, I have a bike when I were a child, as my mom buy for me, bought for me.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child because my mom bought it for me.
主语是“I”时,be动词的过去式应使用“was”,不能使用“were”。建议检查主语与动词形式是否一致。
× Yes, in my country, uh, the bike usually uh
✓ Yes, bikes are usually popular in my country.
原句在“usually”之后没有谓语动词,因此没有表达完整的意思。回答“自行车是否受欢迎”时,可以补上“are popular”。泛指一类自行车时,通常用复数“bikes”。