Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes I have a bike, but two years ago my bike is broken because the road in a rock.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
No, I think my country in the bike is not popular because not funny. What you think, What you think about you?
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 38.0Gợi ý: 질문은 어린 시절에 자전거가 있었는지 묻고 있으므로 과거형으로 바로 답하세요. 현재형인 “I have” 대신 “I had”를 쓰고, 자전거가 고장 난 상황은 “hit a rock”처럼 자연스럽게 표현하면 좋습니다. 고장 난 뒤 어떻게 했는지 한 가지 구체적인 내용을 덧붙이고, 문장을 1~3개로 간결하게 정리하세요.
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it around my neighborhood, but it broke two years ago after I hit a rock in the road.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 23.0Gợi ý: 자전거가 인기 있는지에 대해 “No”라고 답한 뒤, “In my country, bikes aren’t very popular”처럼 자연스러운 어순으로 이유를 설명하세요. “not funny”는 이 문맥에 맞지 않으므로, 교통량이나 대중교통 이용 같은 구체적인 이유를 제시할 수 있습니다. 시험관에게 같은 질문을 반복하기보다는 본인의 생각을 뒷받침하는 세부 내용을 한 가지 덧붙이세요.
Ví dụ: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people prefer to travel by car or public transport, especially in busy cities. Also, some roads aren’t very suitable for cyclists.
× Yes I have a bike, but two years ago my bike is broken because the road in a rock.
✓ Yes, I had a bike, but it broke two years ago because there were rocks on the road.
The question asks about your childhood, so use the past tense 'had' instead of 'have.' The phrase 'two years ago' also refers to a completed past event, so use 'broke' instead of 'is broken.'
× Yes I have a bike, but two years ago my bike is broken because the road in a rock.
✓ Yes, I had a bike, but it broke two years ago because there were rocks on the road.
Use 'on the road' to describe where the rocks were. 'In a rock' does not express this meaning. You can also say 'because of the rocks on the road.'
× No, I think my country in the bike is not popular because not funny.
✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because riding them isn't fun.
The original sentence has an unclear word order and is missing a subject and verb after 'because.' Put 'in my country' after 'popular,' and use the complete clause 'riding them isn't fun.'
× What you think, What you think about you?
✓ What do you think?
Questions in the simple present generally need the auxiliary 'do' before the subject: 'What do you think?' The repeated phrase 'What you think about you?' is not correctly structured and is unnecessary here.