Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

I did not have a particular bike for me while I was growing, but umm, my elder sister used to have a bike and I used to ride along with her, but I was never the one to ride it for myself.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I think bikes are very popular in my country because the commute uh here in Bangladesh from one point to another point is very umm expensive and crowded. So if you have a bike for your umm, own traveling, it is very umm good for you.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then explain that you shared your sister’s bike. Replace the unnatural phrase “a particular bike for me while I was growing” with “my own bike when I was growing up.” Avoid repeating “used to” and “but,” and reduce fillers such as “umm.”

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have my own bike when I was growing up. My older sister had one, though, and I sometimes rode on it with her. I never learned to ride it by myself.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 66.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear answer and support it with a specific reason. Use natural phrases such as “getting around can be expensive and traffic is often heavy” instead of “the commute … is very expensive and crowded.” Clarify whether you mean bicycles or motorbikes if needed, and avoid fillers and repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Bangladesh, especially in busy cities. Public transport can be crowded, and travelling by car can be expensive, so having a bike can make short journeys more convenient. They’re also easier to park in congested areas.

Ngữ pháp

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× I did not have a particular bike for me while I was growing, but umm, my elder sister used to have a bike and I used to ride along with her, but I was never the one to ride it for myself.

✓ I did not have a bike of my own while I was growing up, but my elder sister had a bike, and I used to ride with her. I was never the one who rode it on my own.

The phrase for me usually means that something is intended for you, not that you own it. Use of my own to express ownership. Also, growing up is the natural expression for describing childhood. To make the ownership meaning clear, say ride it on my own rather than ride it for myself.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Crowded— Packed
Expensive— Costly
Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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