Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. When I was a child, my father bought a bike for me as my birthday gift.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. I think bike is very popular in my country, especially in big cities such as Shanghai. You can see there are a lot of comebacks because the transport is very crowded and take bike may save time.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答切题,句子基本自然,也提供了具体细节。可以删去略显重复的 “Yes, of course”,并补充一条相关信息,例如你骑车的频率、地点或感受,让回答更生动。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My father gave me a bike for my birthday when I was about eight, and I often rode it around our neighborhood after school.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答有明确观点和理由,但有几处用词及语法问题:泛指自行车时用复数 “bikes”;“comebacks” 应换成符合语境的词,如 “commuters” 或 “people”;“take bike” 可改为 “riding a bike”,且 “transport is very crowded” 更自然的表达是 “public transport is crowded”。建议用连接词串联观点和原因,并补充具体例子。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities like Shanghai. Since public transport can get very crowded during rush hour, many commuters ride bikes for short journeys. It’s often a convenient way to save time.
× I think bike is very popular in my country, especially in big cities such as Shanghai.
✓ I think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in big cities such as Shanghai.
这里是在泛指自行车这一类事物,应使用复数名词“bikes”,并将动词“is”改为与复数主语搭配的“are”。表达一般事实时,可以用“复数名词 + 复数动词”来泛指一类事物。
× You can see there are a lot of comebacks because the transport is very crowded and take bike may save time.
✓ You can see there are a lot of comebacks because the transport is very crowded and taking a bike may save time.
“take bike may save time”中的动词短语作主语,应使用动名词形式“taking”。当动作或动词短语作主语时,通常使用“动词-ing”形式。
× You can see there are a lot of comebacks because the transport is very crowded and take bike may save time.
✓ You can see there are a lot of comebacks because the transport is very crowded and taking a bike may save time.
“bike”是可数名词单数,前面需要限定词;此处应加不定冠词“a”,说“骑一辆自行车”可表达为“taking a bike”。