Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, but a very popular image many people include, including both adults and children. Ride them to work or school because segments get for people's health.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 5.0Gợi ý: 你只是重复了考官的问题,没有直接回答。请先明确回答“有”或“没有”,再补充一两个具体细节,例如几岁开始骑、在哪里骑,或谁教你骑车。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a small blue bike when I was about six. My father taught me how to ride it in a park near our home, and I used to ride it with my friends at weekends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 你表达了“自行车很受欢迎”的观点,但后面的句子语法和用词不清楚,例如“a very popular image”和“segments get”无法准确传达意思。建议先直接回答,再说明不同年龄段的人会骑自行车通勤或上学,并补充一个具体原因,如方便、环保或有益健康。注意使用完整句子和连接词,例如“because”或“also”。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Both adults and children ride them, and many people use them to commute to work or school. They are convenient and affordable, and cycling is also a good way to stay healthy.
× Yes, but a very popular image many people include, including both adults and children.
✓ Yes, bikes are very popular, and many people, including both adults and children, ride them.
原句缺少完整的主句结构,“a very popular image many people include”不能清楚表达“自行车很受欢迎”。可直接用“bikes are very popular”表达主句,再用“many people ... ride them”补充说明。
× Ride them to work or school because segments get for people's health.
✓ They ride them to work or school because cycling is good for people's health.
这里想表达的是人们骑自行车上班或上学,因此应补出主语“They”,避免句子被理解为祈使句。“because”后面的原因从句也需要完整、自然的结构;可用“cycling is good for people's health”表达“骑自行车有益健康”。