Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I would buy when my seventeenth birthday by case. my family both together for me.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think buys are popular in my country because bikers are everywhere on the street.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: 回答基本难以理解,且没有清楚直接地回答“小时候是否有自行车”。请先明确回答 Yes 或 No,再说明自行车是什么时候、由谁买的。注意使用正确的过去时,例如“got”或“bought”,并使用完整、自然的句子。另请注意,十七岁通常不属于童年,如果想表达小时候的经历,可以换成具体的儿童时期年龄。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was about eight. My parents bought it for my birthday, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 你直接回答了问题,并给出了原因,但“buys”应为“bikes”;“bikers are everywhere on the street”表达不够自然,也可能让人误解为骑自行车的人而非自行车本身。可以具体说明人们骑自行车的原因,例如通勤方便、费用低或交通拥堵,并用“because”连接理由。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people use them for short journeys because they’re affordable and convenient in heavy traffic.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Yes, I would buy when my seventeenth birthday by case.

✓ Yes, I got one for my seventeenth birthday.

这是在描述童年发生的事情,应使用一般过去时。“would buy”不适合表达已经发生的经历;可以说“got one”(得到了一辆)。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× I would buy when my seventeenth birthday

✓ I got one for my seventeenth birthday.

表示“作为生日礼物/为了庆祝生日”时,应该用介词“for”,而不是“when”。可以说“for my seventeenth birthday”。

23: Sentence without a verb(句子缺少动词)

× my family both together for me.

✓ My family bought it together for me.

原句缺少谓语动词,因此不是完整句子。补上过去式动词“bought”后,句子完整地表达了家人一起为我买了自行车。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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