Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I didn't because I was scared to photo, so I don't ride a bike and I even didn't like the bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I think bags are popular with people in big cities because it offers a free wage a freeway war economically to go everywhere. and it's handled. So it is easy to store it.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 你直接回答了问题,但后面的表达有明显的语法和用词问题。“scared to photo”意思不清楚;如果你想说“害怕摔倒”,可以说“scared of falling”。注意保持过去时一致,应说“didn't ride”或“didn't like bikes”,而不是“don't ride”和“didn't like the bike”。可以补充一个具体原因,让回答更自然。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because I was afraid of falling. I preferred walking, so I never really learned to ride one.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 你表达了自己的观点,也尝试解释原因,但部分词语和句子难以理解。“bags”应为“bikes”;“it offers a free wage...”表达不清,可以改成“they are an affordable and convenient way to get around”。注意主谓一致:复数的“bikes”要搭配“they”,并使用清楚的连接词串联理由。你还可以具体说明自行车方便停放或适合短途出行。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in big cities because they’re an affordable and convenient way to get around. They’re especially useful for short trips, and they’re easy to park.

Ngữ pháp

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× No, I didn't because I was scared to photo, so I don't ride a bike and I even didn't like the bike.

✓ No, I didn't because I was scared of riding a bike, so I didn't ride a bike, and I didn't even like bikes.

结合“小时候骑车”的语境,这里应表达“害怕骑自行车”,可说“be scared of riding a bike”。“of”后面接动词时要用动名词形式“riding”。原文中的“photo”与语境不符,因此这里按“骑车”这一意思修正。

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× No, I didn't because I was scared to photo, so I don't ride a bike and I even didn't like the bike.

✓ No, I didn't because I was scared of riding a bike, so I didn't ride a bike, and I didn't even like bikes.

问题询问的是小时候的情况,整句应使用过去时。原文“I don't ride a bike”是现在时,应改为“I didn't ride a bike”。

20: Incorrect adverb placement(副词位置错误)

× No, I didn't because I was scared to photo, so I don't ride a bike and I even didn't like the bike.

✓ No, I didn't because I was scared of riding a bike, so I didn't ride a bike, and I didn't even like bikes.

“even”通常放在助动词“didn't”之后、主要动词“like”之前,因此应说“didn't even like”,而不是“even didn't like”。

27: Subject-verb agreement errors(主谓一致错误)

× Yeah, I think bags are popular with people in big cities because it offers a free wage a freeway war economically to go everywhere. and it's handled. So it is easy to store it.

✓ Yeah, I think bags are popular with people in big cities because they offer an economical way to get around. So they are easy to store.

主语“bags”是复数,后面的谓语动词应使用“offer”,不能用单数形式“offers”。改写后用“they”指代复数的“bags”,相应地使用“are”。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns(代词使用错误)

× Yeah, I think bags are popular with people in big cities because it offers a free wage a freeway war economically to go everywhere. and it's handled. So it is easy to store it.

✓ Yeah, I think bags are popular with people in big cities because they offer an economical way to get around. So they are easy to store.

“bags”是复数,不能用单数代词“it”指代,应使用“they”。后文也要保持指代一致,例如用“they are easy to store”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Big— Large; Elder; Important; Ambitious
Easy— Uncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
Free— Without charge; Unencumbered by; Vacant; Independent; On the loose
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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