Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, actually I have no bike when I m a child, uh, because uh my family was a bit uh uh poorer. And I was born in the village and with no uh so much
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Uh, yes, uh bike was very popular in my country because China is have a lot of population and uh the economic uh uh level was uh a bit of low
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 32.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,并统一使用过去时(例如 *didn’t have*、*was*)。说明家庭经济条件有限后,用一个完整、具体的细节补充原因;不要以未完成的短语结尾。回答控制在2—3句,并删去重复的填充词。
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family didn’t have much money, and bikes weren’t easy for us to afford. I usually walked to school instead.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 用一般现在时回答关于当前情况的问题,例如 *bikes are popular*,并改正主谓搭配(*China has*,而不是 *China is have*)。理由要更具体、逻辑更清楚:可以提到自行车价格实惠、适合短途出行或城市共享单车普及。避免把中国人口多和自行车流行直接关联,减少填充词。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are still quite popular in China, especially for short trips. They’re affordable and convenient, and many cities have bike-sharing services. They can also be a practical way to avoid traffic.
× No, actually I have no bike when I m a child, uh, because uh my family was a bit uh uh poorer.
✓ No, actually, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family was a bit poorer.
这段话描述的是童年时的情况,应使用过去时。表示“没有”可以用过去时“didn't have”;“when I was a child”中的 be 动词也应使用过去式“was”。
× Uh, yes, uh bike was very popular in my country because China is have a lot of population and uh the economic uh uh level was uh a bit of low.
✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because China has a large population, and the economic level is a bit low.
这里是在泛指自行车这一类事物,应使用复数“bikes”,而不是单数“bike”。复数主语应搭配“are”。
× Uh, yes, uh bike was very popular in my country because China is have a lot of population and uh the economic uh uh level was uh a bit of low.
✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because China has a large population, and the economic level is a bit low.
问题询问自行车在你们国家是否受欢迎,回答的是当前情况,因此应使用现在时“are very popular”和“is a bit low”,而不是过去时“was”。
× Uh, yes, uh bike was very popular in my country because China is have a lot of population and uh the economic uh uh level was uh a bit of low.
✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because China has a large population, and the economic level is a bit low.
“China”是第三人称单数主语,描述当前情况时,动词“have”应使用第三人称单数形式“has”。不能在“is”后直接接“have”来表达这个意思。
× Uh, yes, uh bike was very popular in my country because China is have a lot of population and uh the economic uh uh level was uh a bit of low.
✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because China has a large population, and the economic level is a bit low.
“a bit”后面可以直接接形容词“low”,表示“有点低”。这里不需要介词“of”,所以应说“a bit low”,而不是“a bit of low”。
× Uh, yes, uh bike was very popular in my country because China is have a lot of population and uh the economic uh uh level was uh a bit of low.
✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because China has a large population, and the economic level is a bit low.
“population”表示人口总量时,通常说“a large population”,而不是“a lot of population”。也可以说“a lot of people”(很多人)。